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Question

When I look at you my heart starts racing

Remeber the rules for a sonnet ( iambic pentameter, rhyme scheme:ABAB CDCD EFEF GG) 14 lines!!! you may reaarrange the first line if you'd like to make it work :)
Have fun!!!!

WRITE THE WHOLE SONNET!!! try it ;)

Answer 1

When I look at you my heart starts racing
I scan the street to find a quick escape
I quickly turn, my last steps fast retracing
And leave you in the lurch, your mouth agape.

Why must you follow me, you pest?
You always have to ruin all my fun!
I slip into a bar, my back is pressed
Against the wall, I hear your footsteps run

And pass me on the sidewalk, and I sigh
At my reprieve. But now I have to go.
I’m under-age, The boss gives me the eye,
I saunter out, and I go with the flow

Of the pedestrians upon the street.
I have to say, that getaway was neat!

Answer 2

O.K I'll give it a try.

When I look at you, my heart starts racing,
And I wonder what the rain did to you,
You are my flower that I water with embracing,
But oh life, life made you someone new,

Oh the rain, came the rain, watered you one day,
And now you don't need my embrace
You gave me up and my hands, you betrayed.
One day I know the rain will bring you disgrace

Flower you touched my face, it felt like heaven
And when I held you against my heart,
I hugged life and gave up all I was given
Now you're letting us fall apart

One day the rain will stop, I know
And I'll wait for you with my feelings flow

First time to write a sonnet!
Thanks it was SO much fun :)

Answer 3

Hmm, why do I get the feeling this is a homework assignment?
Well, nevertheless, here's my entry:

My heart starts racing when I see your face
A race that it can never hope to win;
For beauty such as yours sets a fast pace
So fast I’ve lost before I can begin.

Still, I must try, for all that I desire
Is only to be near you evermore.
My coldness deep within needs your warm fire,
Upon your wings my soul could finally soar.

And so, I chase your love although it seems
I have no chance of winning that great prize.
But we must always follow all our dreams
For there can be no heaven otherwise.

My heaven here would be within your heart
A heaven that I never would depart.

Answer 4

Me thinks this is homework
I refuse to help you
I would just be a jerk
And it would wreak of pooh

You shouldn't have gone to the bar
Cause now your brain is a little hazy
You smashed your car
And now your feeling lazy

Oh the long walk home
Man I was tired
Walked from the Saddledome
A cab ride I should have hired

I have twenty hours
Ah screw it I'll watch Jack Bauers
CyberNara

Answer 5

my heart starts racing when i look at you