Yesterday, I found out the
the candy shop was closed
so I decided to come the
the next day but it
it was still closed so
so I went the
the next day and it
wasn't so I bought
four lollipops and
and a ringpop
2007-02-03 23:52:19 · 9 answers · asked by keℓsey<3 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Trivia
Basically, everyone got it, including the 'the the' 'so so' that stuff!
2007-02-04 00:19:48 · update #1
You mean besides the fact that you keep repeating words like the the and so so and there is no grammar in the sentence?
2007-02-04 00:00:48 · answer #1 · answered by Snow White 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The grammar stinks!!!! Try this..
Yesterday, I found out the candy shop was closed, so I decided to come back the next day, but it was still closed. I went the next day and it was open and I bought four lollipops and a ring pop.
2007-02-04 00:50:58 · answer #2 · answered by ♥Mommy to 3 year old Jacob and baby on the way♥ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If you found out the candy shop was closed yesterday, then the first next day mentioned would be today, therefore the second next day would be tomorrow. And unless you can predict the future then what is wrong with the statement is you can't purchase things in the future.
2007-02-04 00:01:58 · answer #3 · answered by finding_memo 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Only yesterday the candy shop was closed.
If today is Sunday, yesterday was Saturday.
If you went to the candy shop, the following day, it was today.
Then you say you went on the day following that too, which is "tomorrow".
Are you ahead of time?
How can you say you went tomorrow?
2007-02-04 00:00:21 · answer #4 · answered by curious 4 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Simple.When the shop was open it was tomorrow and you can't have got to tomorrow if its only today
2007-02-04 00:00:13 · answer #5 · answered by bearbrain 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You can't have already bought your candy if that day is tomorrow.
2007-02-04 02:05:33 · answer #6 · answered by Scott B 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
there are two "the" words between come and next day, there are two "the" words between went and next day, two "the" words between out and candy, two "it" words between but and was, and two "so" words between closed and I.
2007-02-04 00:02:01 · answer #7 · answered by Wise Old Man 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aside from the "the the" and "so so" issue, it is a bit tortuous
2007-02-04 04:08:26 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
erm...you repeated the word 'so' in the 5th and 6th lines?
2007-02-04 00:01:36 · answer #9 · answered by tweetyfrog 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋