Okay i have a fan fiction, and i need to ask, Okay, so i have this charectar- Molly, and shes in london and she has a boyfriend, and his brother are both in love with her as she is with the both of them. Plus, she ans his brother have already...um..*cough* ;) anyway, she seems to get along well with her and his bro, but her and her b/f are great together, i dont know what to do...HELP!!! so answer me this: Should Molly stay with Her boyfriend, or Go with his brother?
2007-02-03 15:42:26 · 5 answers · asked by Grey_Sweater 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Step it up a notch and introduce some conflict, like her boyfriend finding out and then he leaves and his brother wants to be with her .But she realizes that she loves the first guy and then she tries to find him but he is too hurt by her and unwilling to trust her .With her believing that she has lost her true love forever
she sets off to go home but the brother who she slept with cares
about them both and wants to help.The two brothers fight, but the first guy realizes that he still loves her anyways,happy ending.
2007-02-03 18:45:50 · answer #1 · answered by irene i 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Molly should go on a trip somewhere and meet an even more awesome guy and um...*cough* as you so aptly put it. While she's away the brothers could start fighting over her and she returns to a feud she has to work out or, if you want to twist the story, one of the brothers dead and the other on trial for his murder. I guess I'm just creating more problems, but they might be fun to solve. Does this help? Good luck writing. :)
2007-02-03 17:37:59 · answer #2 · answered by adanarama 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depends what style you are trying to make it and what mood the story will be in. Who will the audience support the most? Will they feel sympathy for Molly's predicament? Or will they dislike her? Will they be worried for her boyfriend being heartbroken when he finds out what his sister did, or will he be struck with anger over his brother? Or will the brother be upset that Molly is now with his brother?
Get a piece of paper and draw a big triangle. Put each character on one point of the triangle and write notes about what each character feels towards another and how their relationship changes. Write what each character's goals are in the relationship and then what they are willing to do to get their way.
Best of luck, you'll need it.
2007-02-03 16:56:31 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You can either kill one of them off or heighten the tension even more by introducing a best friend for Molly who wants one of them so bad that she can taste it, but is still so loyal to Molly that she won't cross her until the last minute.
2007-02-03 17:10:42 · answer #4 · answered by loryntoo 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
go with his brother but still feel connected to her boyfriend so go back with him but have him not want her or somehting, im not much of a story writer!
2007-02-03 16:16:39 · answer #5 · answered by brdwaylvr 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋