taking it would be wrong
The things I think about
I know are bad and wrong
God, to you I'm shouting
Save me! I've suffered so long
Your love, Your grace they comfort me so
Please God help me!
I've no where else to go!
2007-02-03 14:20:08 · 3 answers · asked by godsgirl200718 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
After I found Part 1, I find it is very moving.
The last line is the key. Sometimes, when I have tried everything I can think of to solve a problem, I finally find myself driven to my knees. A blinding flash of the obvious: let go and let God...
Best of luck!! And keep writing.
2007-02-03 14:50:53 · answer #1 · answered by and_y_knot 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Like most of the teen poetry on Yahoo, REALLY BAD! Poetry lifts the spirit and expands the mind. It's about imagery and illusion. This is about anger at God, or some such thing. This is not the place for it, either. Against Yahoo TOS. Poetry also contains punctuation, something you apparently do not understand. When you put your "work" in public be prepared for all reactions, although all your little contemporaries (your age group) will tell you how wonderful it is because most don't know how to read very well and they don't understand or know what real poetry is. This isn't it! You asked.
2007-02-03 22:57:36 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
I think it is misguided. Why are you bossing God around? God has a plan and it obviously involves you having dirty thoughts. Don't question God or His plan. Go ahead and be dirty, you'll see that God is right.
2007-02-03 22:30:32 · answer #3 · answered by Dennis H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋