A fire is ignited
Inside this heart
it gives no love
This pain, it starts
Inside my head
It makes me forget
The meaning of my life
I want out of it
Will my true self come back?
Will I stay locked up?
Fearfully living in this world
becoming corrupt
My mind is gone
Control is no longer mine
My life is pointless
I live on a thin line
God please get me out
Of the trap that I'm in
I put myself in there
Now my life is a sin
Help me to find it
the life that I lost
Get me out of here
Please God, at any cost!
God, I love you with all I am
but my life is just wasting
What now must I do?
with this pain I am facing
From happiness to pain
I am daily tossed
God get me out
For I am truly lost!
God I need you so much
I'm confused,lost, and sad
don't know where to go
I need you so bad
My life for you seems like nothing
I can't bear to live anymore
If I can't live for God
What am I living for?
This temptation's force
is so very strong
I must refuse to take it
2007-02-03 14:19:12 · 4 answers · asked by godsgirl200718 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
it's really wonderful not to mention deep! it can actually make people think about their situations with God (whether they believe in God or not:)
2007-02-03 14:33:40 · answer #1 · answered by evanescent_eclipse 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Same answer as before. Poetry lifts the spirit and expands the mind. It contains punctuation. It is about imagery and illusion. Your "poem" is the usual Yahoo teen garbage. The usual trite teen angst. The teens here will tell you how wonderful it is,because they write the same garbage and want their egos stroked, too. You asked.
2007-02-03 15:13:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
Wow! I am familiar with your desperation and I think it was very well expressed. You have a natural talent for writing!
2007-02-03 14:26:23 · answer #3 · answered by Jen 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
GO u!
2007-02-03 14:26:37 · answer #4 · answered by e 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋