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I am writing a poem 4 my bf, but I am stuck...
what should I write after this:

*When you are around you light up my day........

I need it to rhyme...thx! ;-)

2007-02-03 12:26:57 · 12 answers · asked by ♥Charming's Princess♥ 3 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

And for all you smarties....nothing about being/not being gay...... :-p

2007-02-03 12:27:25 · update #1

12 answers

"I barely know what to say."

But it would probably mean more if you did it yourself. If you want it, you can take that line, for what it's worth.

2007-02-03 12:30:39 · answer #1 · answered by Rae 1 · 0 0

This is a trick I do to find rhyming words. Go right through the alphabet, using each letter in turn and putting the end of the rhyming word after the alphabet letters. Often you will find an appropriate word which will create an appropriate thought. Try it and see. Good Luck.

2007-02-05 23:17:39 · answer #2 · answered by concernedjean 5 · 0 0

it makes my senses wake up and play

making me always want to be this way

wanting me to always stay

lets go play in the hay

or mold some clay

what do you say

we just may

okay I got carried away but the first ones aren't bad. Good luck!

Andrea

2007-02-03 20:37:34 · answer #3 · answered by mitchellar31 3 · 0 0

When you are around,
you light up my day,
love I have found,
please, don't go away.

2007-02-03 20:44:00 · answer #4 · answered by raybbies 5 · 0 0

because seeing your smile,
makes me think and say,
how did i get so lucky?

Your more then a lover
your a very good friend,

now i am stuck..good luck :)

2007-02-05 11:28:54 · answer #5 · answered by lilred25smc 2 · 0 0

When you're around you light up my day.
If you ever hurt me, I'll make you pay!

2007-02-04 00:43:43 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 0 0

In a most inspiring, wonderful way.

2007-02-03 20:33:22 · answer #7 · answered by nessie 2 · 0 0

when you are around, you light up my day
my life, love, and laughter, always, in all ways

2007-02-04 00:31:49 · answer #8 · answered by subtlelychalant 1 · 0 0

when u are around you light up my day
now that I found you I hope you forever stay

2007-02-03 21:11:54 · answer #9 · answered by WILLISCA_49 2 · 0 0

And when you are far, my world becomes gray.

2007-02-03 20:36:03 · answer #10 · answered by bezi_cat 6 · 0 0

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