How can I make my yugioh deck better. I have a spellcasters themed deck.?

Question

These are in my deck now

Traps:
Sakuretsu Armor
dust tornado
widespread ruin
negate attack
mirror force
magic jammer
pitch black power stone
spellbinding circle
shadow spell
light force sword
torrential tribute

Monsters:
Dark Magician x3
Dark Eradicator Warlock
Sorceror of dark magic
Dark magician girl
skilled dark magician x2
Breaker the magical warrior
royal magical library
rapid fire magician
chaos sorcerer
maha vailo
Chaos command magician
magician of faith
mythical beast cerberus
ancient lamp

Spells:
mystic box
thousand knives
magical dimension x2
diffusion wave motion
pot of greed
brain control
change of heart
graceful charity
mystical space typhoon
dark hole
premature burial
monster reborn
card destruction
mage power
dark magic attack
magical blast
swords of revealing light

by the way Nathan is a homo "cough"

and I dont pay attention to the forbidden cards list, I just play for fun, not in tournaments

Answer 1

--first please check the forbidden list so you wld know what is allowed and not so that the next time you post your deck there will be no need to omit them but for now....
---starting with the spells...
--forbidden are pot, change, hole (i think), and reborn so out they go same goes with chaos sorcerer
--thousand knives and mage power out
--if you are looking to add put in trunade for your swords to retur before destruction or prema to prevent destruction
---monsters
--2 DM out (you have prema and 2 skilled dark anyway) and if you can DMoC
--rapid fire... out try to find apprentice magician (2 of them) and/or old vindictive magician
--you need an extra lv6-up card to summon sorceror so instead of a clogged up DM add another spell caster... i prefer cybernetic magician if you can (others range from great dezard to mind in air its up to you ... you can place again another DM if you want)..
---il get back to this again...
--so as i was saying there is also a good spellcaster card named magical marionette and it also benefits from spells being casted like the cerberus only that it is 5 stars and if you give up 2 spell poind you can destroy monsters... so its up to you
--i personally like maha vailo but i neede equip spells to work so it makes him weak doesnt it so if you want you can replace with gemini elf (that is if you are fine with the earth attribute...)
---moving on to traps
--you can take out widespread ruin, spellbinding and shadowspell
--if it is allowed in your area use magician's circle (two of those) to speed up the summoning of your 2000atk and below monsters (LV5 and higher do not need tributes perfect to summon DMG or the magical marionette)
---i did not take out the sorcerer of dark magic because you want it there (i think) else you wouldnt have placed it there
---you can add in your spell cards 2 the forceful sentry so that you can use to control the hand (and see it as well) of your opp while boosting the spell counters of your cards...
---lightning vortex is also good as well as book of moon....
---with stein out of the way the only problem you will encounter will be zaborg in monster cards, mirror in trap cards and vortex in spell cards....

Answer 2

6/10. Not that good. Why do you have Dark magician? It sucks. Try this deck. It's sure to work better than yours. Monsters: 17 3 Skilled Dark Magician 3 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer 3 Magical Exemplar 1 Breaker the Magical Warrior 3 Night's End Sorcerer 2 Old-Vindictive Magician 2 Apprentice Magician Spells: 15 3 Secret Village of the Spellcasters 2 Allure of Darkness 2 Terraforming 2 Foolish Burial 1 Heavy Storm 1 Mystical Space Typhoon 1 Monster Reborn 1 Brain Control 2 Book of Moon Traps: 8 3 Solemn Judgment 2 Bottomless Trap Hole 2 Magician's Circle 1 Mirror Force Total: 40 cards Extra Deck: 15 2 Red Dragon Archfiend 1 Goyo Guardian 2 Thought Ruler Archfiend 1 Iron Chain Dragon 2 Stardust Dragon 1 Black Rose Dragon 1 Magical Android 3 Tempest Magician 2 Arcanite Magician Side Deck: 15 2 Thunder King Rai-Oh 2 Magicial Dimension 2 Mind Control 1 Swords of Revealing Light 2 Compulsory Evacuation Device 2 Dimensional Prison 2 Dust Tornado 1 Graceful Revival 1 Magician's Circle

Answer 3

For being under the Traditional Style this is a pretty good deck. I would give it about an 8/10.

Answer 4

to many cards that requir a tribute and some magician valkyrie cards