I need help in correcting these sentences?

Question

1. Hai lives in Bristow, Virginia, Tie lives in Houston, Texas.
2. Mr. Levy's tests are very difficult. Mrs. O'Reilly's tests are too easy.
3. The sun is 93 million miles away from the earth that is a long distance.
4. Edgar Allan Poe is one of my favorite writers he led a strange life.
5. He lived as if there were no tomorrow, now he is flat broke.
6. Socrates was a famus Greek philosopher, Plato was also very popular.
7. The computer monitor is too small there is not enough space on the hard drive.
8. Heather turned in her nomination form she thought there would be two winners.
9. Dominique wrote a book she looked forward to receiving her first royalty check.
10. He was proved guilty, the judge was very lenient.

Answer 1

1. Hai lives in Bristow, Virginia, and Tie lives in Houston, Texas.
2. Mr. Levy's tests are very difficult. Mrs. O'Reilly's tests are too easy.
3. The sun is 93 million miles away from the earth. That is a long distance.
4. Edgar Allan Poe is one of my favorite writers. He lead a strange life.
5. He lived as if there were no tomorrow, and now he is flat broke.
6. Socrates was a famous Greek philosopher. Plato was also very popular.
7. The computer monitor is too small. There is not enough space on the hard drive.
8. Heather turned in her nomination form. She thought there would be two winners.
9. Dominique wrote a book. She looked forward to receiving her first royalty check.
10. He was proven guilty, however, the judge was very lenient.

Answer 2

1. Hai lives in Los Angeles, California, Tie lives in a garbage bin.
2. Mr. Levy's tests are very easy. Mrs. O'Reilly's tests are too difficult.
3. The sun is 93 million miles away from the earth that is a long distance. This is true.
4. Stephen King is one of my favorite writers he led a strange life.
5. He lived as if there were no tomorrow, now he is a lottery millionaire.
6. Socrates was a famus Greek philosopher, Plato was also very popular. So is Madonna.
7. The computer monitor is too small there is NEVER enough space on the hard drive.
8. Heather turned in her nomination form she thought there would be TEN winners.
9. Dominique wrote a check she looked forward to receiving her first royalty book.
10. He was proved innocent, the judge was a fan of John Lennon.

Answer 3

1. Hai lives in Bristow, Virgina, and Tie lives in Houston, Texas.
2. Mr. Levy's test are very difficult, and Mrs. O'Reilly's test are too easy.
3.The sun is 93 million miles away from Earth, that is a long distance.
4. Edgar Allan Poe is one of my favorite writers, he led a strange life.
5. He lived as if the was no tommorow, now he is flat broke.
6.?????
7. The computer monitre is too small, and there is not enough space on the hard drive.
8. Heather turned in her nomination form, she thought there would be two winners.
9. Dominqe wrote a book, she looked forward to reciveing her fist royalty check.
10. He was proved guilty, but the judge was very leniant.



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Answer 4

1. Hai ..... Virginia; Tie ......Texas
2. .......difficult; Mrs. O'Reilly's .....
3. the earth; that is....
4. ...writers; he led...
5. ...tomorrow; now he
6. ...philosopher; Plato...
7. ... small; there is...
8. ...form; she thought...
9. ... book; she looked ...
10. ....guilty; the judge...

Sorry I shortcut-ed my way through, I'm lazy haha.
You just basically need semicolons in between. Next time, I think you should try doing it instead of asking people on Yahoo!

Answer 5

1 lives= recides
2. comma after difficult
3.comma after earth.
4.comma after writers
5.is correct
6.famus= famous .....Plato was also a famous philosopher.
7 The computer.monitor hasn't the capacity space for the hard drive.
8.comma after form
9.comma after book
10.proven guilty. or found guilty and the judge was very lenient

Answer 6

Just a skip up the road,off to school you go.
Don't be a bad boy Johnny don't you sllip-up or play the fool,Oh no Ma oh no Da,I'll be you're golden boy.
I will obey every golden rule Johnny .be good be good be good begood Johnny ...

Answer 7

1. semicolon instead of comma. or "and" or "but" before "Tie"
2. comma instead of period, and then "but" before "Mrs."
3. comma after "earth", and "which" instead of "that". or period after "earth" and start a new sentence.
4. comma after "writers", and "who" instead of "he". or period after "writers" and start a new sentence.
5. "and" or "but" or "so" before "now"
6. "and" or "but" before "Plato"
7. comma after "small", and "and" before "there". or period after "small" and start a new sentence.
8. "because" or "but" before "she"
9. period after "book" and start a new sentence.
10. semicolon instead of comma. or "but" or "because" before "the". or period instead of comma and start a new sentence.

Answer 8

I serious, I see why you need help. it doesn't make no sense.

Answer 9

do ur own hw!!

Answer 10

i think you are lazy....