Could someone help me with a conclusion statment for this narritive i have to write? Its over my ski trip to South dakota this past christmas. I need some kind of cool intro after that i can pretty much write everything else. Its over me and my friends going to south dakota and my friend brandon breaking his finger, ect ect
2007-02-03 05:25:07 · 5 answers · asked by Hex 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Im a Freshman in a CC and i just started the paper thats due next thursday...im not good at writing...but i am good at reading. Just didnt feel like writing one so i thought someone else could for me :)
2007-02-03 05:41:36 · update #1
it really depends on how u wrote the rest of ur paper. if ur really stuck write the whole thing over again to have some momentum when u reach the clincher, but try this:
"apart from Brandon's incident, I had a blast on my ski trip"
or
"the next time you go on a ski trip remember not to(however Brandon broke his finger)"
2007-02-03 05:34:49 · answer #1 · answered by katemeister80 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
State something like how this past Christmas was different for you than most, one that took you to the cold snowy mountains of america's midwest. Contrast it to what your state is like during December. The describe the mountain that you ended up skiing on, as your car approached it, you could see it getting closer and closer, and how you felt about that. Mention that it was fun and even though one of your friends suffered a little, you'd like to do it again sometime. Then lead into the main part of the story by saying this was how your memorable Chrstmas 2006 came to pass.
2007-02-03 13:37:35 · answer #2 · answered by PH 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you tricking us to help you with your intro? Have you even started your writing assignment yet? Go do that firest. After you're done you'll be able to do your own conclusion. Same thing with your intro. Start writing, and then put them in perspective. when you're done with that, you re-read and re-revise your story, and soon enough you'll figure out your intro, and your conclusion. Good enough, yes?
2007-02-03 13:38:17 · answer #3 · answered by FILO 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Problem! You ask for a conclusion and then ask for an introduction. Talk with your instructor. What grade are you in?
2007-02-03 13:31:00 · answer #4 · answered by g_steed 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
In conclusion, my trip ski trip was ______.
Hopefully in the future_____.
fun, exciting, interesting, exotic, intense, etc..
2007-02-03 13:33:58 · answer #5 · answered by Lindsay 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋