~ANTICIPATED STORY~
it started just a blink of an eye,
that turned my lips into a smile..
coz' you have that guts,
that crazes my heart,
and makes my time worth a lot...
but now it's time
to realize..
that now my days
are sad and frown..
i cant forget those times we've shared..
and i cannot make those things again..
coz' now i know i can't transgress..
your feelings for him that makes you stressed..
~YOU DON'T CARE~
don't make me feel cared for..
coz' i know you really don't..
what friends are for?
doesn't really meant anymore..
someone have broke it..
our friendship was lost..
you know that i really mean it,
but i don't think you mean it too..
i was left in the dark,
sadness and anxieties builds up enormously..
how do i wish your presence..
coz' i know you doesn't care for me anymore...
2007-02-02 19:02:43 · 3 answers · asked by under_convergence 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Are you writing to the electric company ? I just had to say it . Good luck w/your writing!
2007-02-02 19:07:41 · answer #1 · answered by Lisa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I examine this two times. the way you layer longer tale-correct prose is admirable, and something I actually have a lot difficulty with. you're making it look straightforward, organic, yet all those who write understand the different is authentic. I frequently degree the effectiveness of a chunk with assistance from the type of TD's........Jealousy rears it is eco-friendly head. Kudos to you, Mr Carney.
2016-11-02 04:54:19 · answer #2 · answered by dembinski 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol sorry dude its kinda steep for me.
2007-02-02 19:07:03 · answer #3 · answered by sonu 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋