What do you think of my song lyrics?

Question

To prevent it from being stolen, I have removed parts of the bridge, closing and last few lines of chorus. I'm writing for my band called Random Inspiration, and it's composed to an acoustic pop genre with a little unusual beat. The asterisks show the parts which have been removed.

Verse1

I'm not taking orders from anyone else
Unlike that girl from yesterday
cos i've invented a whole new personality
you wouldn't even recognize me
cos

Chorus

wake up
to the brand new me
there's no one else like me
sing along
to the brand new sound
it's new even to me
cos i've become new
made up my second life
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verse2

can you tell i've changed
can you tell i've turned
the tables onto you
cos you left me empty
and i'm whole again
no thanks to you
i'm the brand new me

Chorus

Bridge
i'm not missing the old me
i'm finally standing on my own two feet
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closing
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I'd really like to hear what everyone thinks. If you says it's good, how is it good? And why? It's just random inspiration, really. I thought it was supposed to be a happy song about breaking free and self actualization. Will it sell if i produce it?

Answer 1

you sound bitter.
but it's good.

Answer 2

Sounds pretty good