I am in the 6th grade,and I entered this poem to a conest.Do you think I have good chances of winning?
"Healed"
Knowing you were gone,
tore me up inside,
I just couldn't let you see,
all the feelings I put aside.
When I couldn't talk to you,
I about died,
and every night,
I sat on my bed and cried.
Seeing you,
made my heart skip a beat,
and when I thought about you,
I couldn't even sleep.
Being away from you,
changed me so much,
I was missing you,
and your loving touch.
You're back in my life,
and I learned to deal,
my hear was torn,
now its healed.
~Jessica Pelfrey~
2007-02-02 08:09:22 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
For a 6th grader it is inspiring! You have talent. As for winning, Sure you have a great chance to win, but I am not your judge. I hope the judges will be kind to you as you do have talent! I hope the adults in your life continue to encourage you in all that you do!
=0) Good Job and Good Luck!
2007-02-02 08:22:10 · answer #1 · answered by ♥Sparkling♥Jules♥ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that was good. It was deep. i think u have a great chance of winning. Oh, u missed the t in heart in the second to last line.
2007-02-02 16:18:28 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is beautiful. rteminds me of what I am personally going through right now.
Thanks.
2007-02-02 16:29:50 · answer #3 · answered by Terrence B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is really good,you should most likely win.Good Luck
2007-02-02 21:52:23 · answer #4 · answered by Ally 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think that it is actually pretty good... well done.
2007-02-02 16:17:11 · answer #5 · answered by ososweet92 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not really.
2007-02-02 16:16:19 · answer #6 · answered by Rob G 1 · 0⤊ 4⤋