The pigeons in Trafalgar Square gather all the
the seeds to eat, beneath the column of Lord Nelson
surrounded by the
the four huge lions.
2007-02-02 07:18:38 · 16 answers · asked by Spiny Norman 7 in Education & Reference ➔ Trivia
That "the the" part will trick a lot of people - you'd be surprised. I was tricked by it years ago.
2007-02-02 07:26:22 · answer #1 · answered by jh361 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The sentence, not paragraph is a fragment and it also sounds a bit awkward:
The pigeons in Trafalgar Square gatherS all OF the
the seeds to eat, beneath the column THAT IS surrounded by the
the four huge lions of Lord Nelson
I suggest moving the phrase "surrounded by the
the four huge lions" after "column" b/c the way you orginally had it, it sounds like the lions are surrounding Lord Nelson. By placing the phrase after the word that the lions are surrounding, it makes better sense. By the way, what you have is called a misplaced modifer.
2007-02-02 15:28:19 · answer #2 · answered by Avigail 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The pigeons needs an apostrophe.
All the the seeds to eat.
Pigeons do not gather seeds.
Surrounded by the the four huge lions.
The whole paragraph is full of mistakes
2007-02-02 15:28:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
there r 2 "the" 's
2007-02-02 15:42:15 · answer #4 · answered by psychoffspring 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
All the the seeds
and surrounded by the the four huge lions.
The 'the the' parts are wrong.
2007-02-02 15:23:15 · answer #5 · answered by FairyBlessed 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Trafalgar Square no longer has great flocks of pigeons.
2007-02-03 01:15:00 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The "double the" part, and I'd put that comma after "Nelson".
2007-02-02 15:57:51 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you've got two of the 'the' in 'by the the four huge lions'
2007-02-02 15:28:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
On each line, the
the is repeated.
2007-02-02 18:05:20 · answer #9 · answered by ♥Petlover♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its to long. You need periods.
2007-02-02 16:48:44 · answer #10 · answered by Emm♥ 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋