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A seed sown grown to be a wind,
Of a course needed shelter,
For the ever being not seeming
To be existing, never to be only living.
Please hear me don't be mad,
For a course yet to bloom,
Leave this chance to this directions,
A path may not want to leave behind,
Only this destination what would only be,
Everything what pleases to see,
Then it is the greatest thing will be,
Just wait around and you'll see,
Around there all you will be,
'cause your days won't be over until it's to be me.

2007-02-01 17:58:32 · 3 answers · asked by Jim S 1 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

3 answers

i don't know paraphase.
i couldn't understand wht u wanted to say through ur poem i feel you could improve i feel u should start writing simple poems
n then start writing ur feelings through poem

2007-02-01 21:55:21 · answer #1 · answered by FARAH 2 · 1 0

im sorry but u lost me after the first line, be a clearer in what u are saying, poetry is not just putting a bunch of pretty words together. harsh words to say, but u asked, and its true. i really cant paraphrase this poem, but i think that its something about starting small and growing to be bigger? just reading it feels intimidating to the reader in a literary sense.

2007-02-02 04:39:10 · answer #2 · answered by Blade 2 · 0 0

I can not paraphrase it. It was not written by a poet who knows the English language. Did you write it?

2007-02-01 18:05:55 · answer #3 · answered by Xpi 3 · 1 1

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