Help me finish my SONNET?

Question

ok so i have a shakespear sonnet due tomorrow.. its supposed to be like a hate poem. here is the poem format..

abab

cdcd

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and here is what i have so far


I compare you to a pair of gym socks.
You are old, dirty, and no one wants you.
I hate you, you might as well be a rock.
Everyone hates you, if you only knew.

You smell disgusting, your always rotten.




yes it is suppossed to be somewhat funny and alo have hate. PLEASE help me finish this or give me a few lines or something!!! : ) thanks!

Answer 1

You're doing a great job on your own! The first part is well-written. Just keep going...

If you're having trouble with the next part, try writing the end couplet first, and then go back to the middle part.

Answer 2

sorry, it's not very good and i couldnt finish. but this is all that i could come up with. hope it helps!!! yours is really good though...your probably better off finishing it yourself...since you seem good at it =) best of luck

I compare you to a pair of gym socks.
You are old, dirty, and no one wants you.
I hate you, you might as well be a rock.
Everyone hates you, if you only knew.
You smell disgusting, you're always rotten
i hold my nose every time you walk near
if only you were really soft, cotton
i'd easily throw you away, my dear