As the tolling begins, the harshness of its sound suspends in the air,
reminding us of the times when disappointment felt like a slap on the
face, that stung deep inside
2007-02-01 14:59:52 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
This is not a run-on sentance; It flows well - no comma splices, etc. This one works for me. (Just add a period on the end.)
2007-02-01 15:11:33 · answer #1 · answered by Yep! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, it's just a long sentence. It's very poetic, too. There should not be a comma between face and that.
2007-02-01 23:07:58 · answer #2 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How bout.....
'...in the air. It reminds us......'
I don't think you need the comma between face and that.
If you said,
'...on the face, stinging deep inside.'
it would make more sense to me and you would need the comma.
2007-02-01 23:16:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yes.
How about:
"... in the air, it reminds us..."
2007-02-01 23:03:34 · answer #4 · answered by Sugar Pie 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋