SPELL CHECK THIS learning english?

Question

My first laugage is spanish so spell correct any errors i am 12 years old and my family came to america from mexico 3 years ago so i am still learning here is the essay


J moss was born in Detroit and went by the name of
James moss he was the son of the gospel artist
Bill Moss, Sr., and spent move of his youthful days on tours with his father. J moss and his brother often sung together. They performed on weekends and even recorded two albums .J moss soon started key boarding as well as song writing, he was also introduced to the business side of the music industry. He attended Michigan university for two years but wanted to pursue his career in music and so he did. When he left collage he signed with a local record company and unfortunately released two unsuccessful albums significantly, around this time he became familiar with Paul Allen in addition to Walter Kearney, furthermore the three began working together as PAJAM. in excess of of the next seven years, the PAJAM team became Gospel music's most creative hit makers. J moss music style is singing over hip hop type beats. The J moss project was released September 2004 with the amazing hit track We Must Praise .PAJAM unquestionably will be one of the most anticipated groups for years to come.

Answer 1

. . .and spent "most" (not move) of his youthful . . .
. . . Michigan University (not university) . . .
. . . When he left college, (needs a comma) . . .he signed . . .
. . . .two unsuccessful albums. (end sentence there. Begin new sentence without "significantly) . . .
. . . Around this time . . .(new sentence, capitalize Around.)
. . .with Paul Allen and Walter Kearney . . . (use "and" not "in addition to"
. . . with Paul Allen and Walter Kearney. (end sentence here)
. . .The three began working . . .(no not use "furthermore)
. . .For more than seven years, . . . (no not use " in excess of the" and add comma after seven years)
. . . "We Must Praise". . . (use quotation marks around this song title)

Answer 2

The spelling errors will have a word in parentheses next to them with the correct spelling. Good luck with learning english, I know its tough.

J moss was born in Detroit and went by the name of
James moss he was the son of the gospel artist
Bill Moss, Sr., and spent move (MOST) of his youthful days on tours with his father. J moss and his brother often sung (SANG) together. They performed on weekends and even recorded two albums .J moss soon started key boarding as well as song writing, he was also introduced to the business side of the music industry. He attended Michigan university for two years but wanted to pursue his career in music and so he did. When he left collage (COLLEGE) he signed with a local record company and unfortunately released two unsuccessful albums significantly, around this time he became familiar with Paul Allen in addition to Walter Kearney, furthermore the three began working together as PAJAM. in excess of of the next seven years, the PAJAM team became Gospel music's most creative hit makers. J moss(add an ' at the end of this wrd) music style is singing over hip hop type beats. The J moss project was released September 2004 with the amazing hit track We Must Praise .PAJAM unquestionably will be one of the most anticipated groups for years to come.

Excellent job!! There were only like, 2-3 mistakes in there. Very good. hope you get and A on your essay!

Answer 3

WOW! you're really good at english for only being here for three years!!! hope u luv the US, i know I do!!!! :) freedom rox!
Here's what i saw:
...collage he signed with a local record company and....

Collage is spelled college

a collage is a piece of art put together by gluing a bunch of papers together.

hasta la vista senor! i have to study for an spanish test (ironic, huh?)

Answer 4

I don't see any errors. Keep up the good work!

Answer 5

keyboarding is 1 word
college-not collage
that was all I could find for spelling...good luck.

Answer 6

a mi me gusta las bellas chicas y los tacos!

Viva Francia!!!!

Answer 7

language was spelled wrong and that was about it.

: )

Answer 8

ha mexico