Would you please correct the following sentence. Thank you.
Political Marriages - Sengoku daimyo considered their sisters and children to pawns in their power games.
(Sengoku daimyo is the rulers of wartime period in Japan)
2007-02-01 08:02:04 · 7 answers · asked by Taro K 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Sengoku daimyo considered their sisters and children to BE pawns in their power games.
2007-02-01 08:05:15 · answer #1 · answered by techteach03 5 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Sengoku daimyo considered their sisters and children pawns in power games.
2007-02-01 16:29:05 · answer #2 · answered by peskylisa 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Political Marriages - Sengoku daimyo considered their sisters and children pawns in their power games.
2007-02-01 16:28:47 · answer #3 · answered by Jill P 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If S and d are two different people, then it's their sisters;
Political Marriages - Sengoku and Daimyo used their sisters and children as pawns in their power games.
But if it is one person, then this is correct,
Political Marriages - Sengoku daimyo used his sisters and children as pawns in his power games.
2007-02-01 16:09:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
"Sengoku daimyo considered their sisters and children pawns in their power games. "
Take out the "to". It's unnecessary, and adding "be" makes it wordy and passive, both bad.
2007-02-01 16:08:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sengoku Daimayo considered their sisters and children two pawns in their power games.
2007-02-01 16:07:39 · answer #6 · answered by GGbaby13 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Considered their children *as* pawns not *to* pawns~~ try large caps D for this name ~~Daimyo
2007-02-01 16:14:01 · answer #7 · answered by ♥NEVAR♥ 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋