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I keep walking,
in search of escape
I see you walking,
but a different way

I cannot feel you,
I cannot speak
You can’t see my love,
your eyes are too weak

I stand and remember
that day so long ago,
I feel it was my fault
that you had to go.

You turned left
when I kept going straight
Songs that we loved,
now songs that I hate

I wish I could tell you,
I wish you would see,
What I feel for you,
means much more to me,

Than just any like,
Than just any crush
You’re walking with her,
and holding her hand,
you whisper to her,
and she starts to blush

I do not feel anger,
I feel no jealousy,
I know you don’t mean it,
But you still hurt me

The journey is long,
As is my life,
I want to be with you,
Someday be your wife

Although this long path
seems never to end,
I trust that when day,
I’ll come to a bend

Where questions are answered
Where doubts are erased
So all of my problems,
for once may be faced

I don’t hate you now,
And I never will,
For no matter the guy,
Your shoes can’t be filled
I can hear your voice,
Wherever I go
The way I care for you,
You might never know

When I see your face,
In the sky up above,
There’s only one word,
that I’m thinking of

Let me say this,
for once and for all
The only word I see,
in my head is “love”

2007-01-31 10:25:51 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

11 answers

"Love"? Or maybe "True Love"?

2007-01-31 10:31:51 · answer #1 · answered by russia 3 · 0 0

How about "A Long Winded Ode For A Pointless Poem?"

2007-01-31 10:45:29 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I think "Atlas" is a good kind of totallity to it-an allusion to the greek titan who holds the entire world on his shoulders-perhaps the enormity and all-inclusiveness of love and relationships would lend itself to your intentions and tone of the poem? It also has the lyrical intonation that you carry in the work itself!

Hope this helps!
Shane

2007-01-31 10:39:24 · answer #3 · answered by frosty_taz 2 · 0 0

Disappointment

2007-02-01 08:39:12 · answer #4 · answered by flowerpet56 5 · 0 1

Invisability

2007-01-31 10:31:04 · answer #5 · answered by elise n 1 · 0 1

Rememberance of you,

Memories of you,

Our paths part but never forgoten,

Paths parted but never forgoten,

The walk of love,

The path of love,

The path of love never forgoten.

2007-01-31 10:39:29 · answer #6 · answered by Jack P 3 · 0 0

Love Goes Left....or just Love Left

I know, I know.... not the best. Hope you find a good one. :)

2007-01-31 10:34:44 · answer #7 · answered by B 1 · 0 0

cloudy clear

2007-01-31 10:30:13 · answer #8 · answered by wise 5 · 0 0

I keep walking or the sky up above...................bravo, nice poem...

2007-01-31 10:33:28 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

"narrow-minded"....kinda sux, but it seems like u always think about him

2007-01-31 10:41:02 · answer #10 · answered by iluvfranknfurter 2 · 0 2

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