I am writing a short story about a young man who discovers his employer is abusing one of his own daughters. The story is at the point where the abuser know someone is on to him but not who. As a young person what are my protagonists options (I am thinking of having him contact the cops)? What would be a good ending. How would the police peruse this situation when reported…
2007-01-31 06:30:27 · 12 answers · asked by Ralph 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
a lawyer is not very dramatic and the victom is not of legal age
2007-01-31 06:43:46 · update #1
Just to clarify its the boss abusing his own teenage daughter and the employee (te protagonist), a teenage boy, finds out...
2007-01-31 06:49:32 · update #2
Tough question with several answers. You have to put your self in the man who's daughter is being abused. Would you call the cops or handle it your self.( kick his ***, hire a hit man) How does the employer have contact with the girl? I mean the employer would have to have time and opportunity to be alone with the girl. What kind of position in the company does the father hold, the higher-up in the company he is the more he has to loose. Some one making minimum wage would most likely just kick the guys ***. someone that is a manager would have more to loose and may look at other options. Ironic twists are usually the best, have the father tell his best friend about it and ask for advice, have the father and best friend working up some kind of revenge to get money out of the employer and then expose him. Then have the employer come to the father for advice to put the father in the middle. some how in the end have the girl come forward and tell that it was the best friend no the employer but only after the employer has been crushed and the best friend took the black male money and left the country.
WOW What A Story!
2007-01-31 06:45:58 · answer #1 · answered by cajohnson667 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The police are dubious about the teenager's story and they are already hard pressed with a recent spate of missing persons reports. The father, that very same night, becomes the victim of an alien abduction. (It happens all the time.) The man's wife, who has apparently been the unobservant type up to this point of time, does actually witness, to her horror, spacemen donned in "I love George Bush' t-shirts making their escape with the limp figure of her husband into what looks like a bubble balanced on a tripod. Despite immense post-traumatic trauma manages to call 911 and reports what she has just seen. Two men in black turn up to reassure her they are on the case. Then with a sudden movement, the teenager wakes from this dream, perspiring, shaking - was it just all a dream ?
I'd go for another answer if I were you.
2007-02-08 01:20:27 · answer #2 · answered by John M 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have the protagonist blackmail the boss. Unless the man stops abusing the daughter and pays your protagonist a certain sum of money and guarantees him advancement in the company, he's going to go to the police.
2007-01-31 07:32:59 · answer #3 · answered by Shelley L 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is really frank, but kill someone. Not the daughter being abused, but someone. Maybe you could have the father catch the man abusing the girl and kill the abuser, or just have the cops arrest him. Really simple and maybe not the best, but think about it. You're the author, so you could make the suggestion sound better.
2007-01-31 08:31:38 · answer #4 · answered by Yuffie K 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jst make the young boy as the lover of the girl.. when the boy gets to know about father's(abusers's) intentions then he and the girl makes a plan to catch her father red handed..they also call the cops as the witness..the girl starts pretendings herself as a prey in front of her father.. and as her father starts abusing her then suddenly the cops enters the room and catch him red handed...and after this they both live together happily after...
2007-02-05 17:13:15 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rangers ends quiet?! have you ever even been to the two ends? And it needless to say relies upon on what team you help! And no longer quickly i do no longer think of the Celtic end would be making a track and dancing! no longer for long besides!
2016-11-23 17:56:22 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go Greek tragedy on it! The boy, over powered by his sense of injustice goes to confront his boss. His boss, having had a revelation in a dream, goes to confess (police, priest, the girl's mother, whomever), the girl, unaware that anyone knows of her plight, and unable to live like this any more, plans to kill herself in her father's office, damning him forever. The young man, in his fury, kills the girl by mistake, and flees to her house to tell her her father is dead. On the way, he sees the father going (wherever) and realizes his mistake. He throws himself into a river. The father makes his confession, and (whomever) goes to his office (for whatever reason) and finds the girl. Thinking the father must of done it, he is tried, convicted, and hung.
2007-02-08 03:51:27 · answer #7 · answered by mizkc 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its hard to say with out reading your story so far. What kind of relationship does the boy have with the teenage girl? If they know eachother...and she trusts him then he could try to remove her from the situation aka they could run away.
2007-02-04 11:04:25 · answer #8 · answered by LoveBats 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
have the protagonist set his boss up and catch him red handed.then the police can take it from there.
2007-02-07 23:19:52 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why not a lawyer...is the girl of legal age?
2007-01-31 06:39:57 · answer #10 · answered by shanekeavy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋