My Angel..
Your my angel,
Your my star,
Although I dont really know who you are.
Those jade eyes take my breath away,
Every time you drift my way,
Being with you makes me feel at home,
And your hands are the lock that keep me safe.
Spending tim with you is like running away,
To a secret place where we hide for the day.
Your soft voice makes me melt,
Into your heart,
Then to your scent.
Dont know if you will always be mine,
But lets enjoy now,
Forget about time.
Cause today you are here,
Holding my heart,
Teliing me that we'll never part
2007-01-30 05:51:31 · 11 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's a very beautiful poem about how you feel about someone you really care for . I would rate it 100%...............Excellent!
2007-01-30 05:56:36 · answer #1 · answered by ********* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 / 10
2007-01-30 13:54:29 · answer #2 · answered by Mag 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To me this is more like lyrics of a pop music song.
Do you really intend it to be rated as a 'poem'? You surely know that you have serious competitors ...
Why don't you read some love poems by great poets of your mother tongue and than you will be better armed to rate your poem by yourself, for yourself.
2007-01-30 13:59:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1-Worst Poem I Have Ever Read & 10-Best Poem I have Every Read
I would have to give you a 5...your words are too "simple". Use words that are more meaningful.
2007-01-30 13:55:51 · answer #4 · answered by chandee_international_beauty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Once we ignore the apostrophe abuse (your/you're)
We find that your poem is of no use
You're in love with someone you don't know
For all we can tell, she's a street corner ho.
2007-01-30 13:57:43 · answer #5 · answered by snootymcpooty 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwww thats sooo sweet!!! ........i luv it 9/10
the reason its not 10 is cos the angel star bit at the start..... :] â¥
2007-01-30 13:55:18 · answer #6 · answered by youdidnotjustsaythat 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds more like a song
2007-01-30 13:54:35 · answer #7 · answered by magalia hillbillies 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If someone sent this to me I would love it.
2007-01-30 13:57:00 · answer #8 · answered by linguini11 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay.... 6 out of 10
2007-01-30 13:54:33 · answer #9 · answered by Doug R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good! You mind if I use this?
2007-01-30 13:54:39 · answer #10 · answered by Fred L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋