What do you think of my poem?

Question

Shades of Difference

And I thought it was you and me
But I was wrong
What are you gonna do
When your heart is fractured and you can’t move on

And every shade of difference
That you may never come to see
I’ll still change it for you
I’ll make the colours spin
So someday you may find a little peace
In this crazy world that you chose to leave
I’d take you around the world and show you everything

And I missed you on the day you left
I miss you everyday
I keep thinking back to when
We were just kids
With nothing more than dreams
What I wouldn’t give to have one more day
To sit under that bridge
And to just talk the day away
You made my heart happy
In a million different ways
You are my best friend
And that will never change

And every shade of difference
That you may never come to see
I’ll still change it for you
I’ll make the colours spin
So someday you may find a little peace
In this crazy world that you chose to leave
I’d take you around the world and show you everything

I miss you, my friend
More than you’ll ever believe

Answer 1

excellent wording and attention to detail, keep up the good work!

Answer 2

Very moving