Sad poems written.
Chilled to the bone, blood runs smooth.
Winter is so cruel.
2007-01-30 02:27:27 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Other - Cultures & Groups
i pretty much HATE haiku. theyre pretty gayyy. and i can say that, because i am too. lol but anyways. last night i just wrote this because i had been thinking about the form since we have to be writing them for english. well, im not gunna show this to my teacher, but i thought it was pretty cool how i wrote an emo haiku. didnt think that was possible...lol
2007-01-30 02:47:44 · update #1
It's cool... Here's a tanka I wrote years ago:
Gentle falling rain
The raindrops fall from heaven
Rinsing away sin
A peaceful world would follow
If people were like raindrops
2007-01-30 04:04:49 · answer #1 · answered by ♥michele♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good :)
I once saw an MSN display pic, that said:
Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
And it made me laugh for a very long time. It still does!
Peace out x
2007-01-30 10:39:27 · answer #2 · answered by Pebbles 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say
Snow flakes are falling
Chilled to the bone, blood flows slow
Winter is so cruel
2007-01-30 12:15:55 · answer #3 · answered by yakkydoc 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how can blood run smooth if you're chilled to the bone lol - i would find another word if you want to describe freezing and sadness
2007-01-30 11:58:11 · answer #4 · answered by warr31 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I've never understood haiku!
2007-01-30 10:35:27 · answer #5 · answered by DialM4Speed 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋