My Angel..
Your my angel,
Your my star,
Although I dont really know who you are.
Those jade eyes take my breath away,
Every time you drift my way,
Being with you makes me feel at home,
And your hands are the lock that keep me safe.
Spending tim with you is like running away,
To a secret place where we hide for the day.
Your soft voice makes me melt,
Into your heart,
Then to your scent.
Dont know if you will always be mine,
But lets enjoy now,
Forget about time.
Cause today you are here,
Holding my heart,
Teliing me that we'll never part
2007-01-30 00:12:07 · 8 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it
a poem is yours, not everyone needs to like it. Just words from your self
your words can never be wrong if their from the heart
2007-01-30 00:26:01 · answer #1 · answered by maisyn3m ♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-01-30 08:16:28 · answer #2 · answered by ?Sherbear ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your = you're x2
and tim = time x 1
the words are good, but it doesnt seem to have a real pattern with the way it is written, that may be the point, but it doesnt flow as well as it could.
7.9/10
2007-01-30 08:18:29 · answer #3 · answered by Bistro 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hillarious. I especially like the part about spending tim.
2007-01-30 08:16:05 · answer #4 · answered by people are scum 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice
although, these three lines are a little awkward :
Your soft voice makes me melt,
Into your heart,
Then to your scent.
2007-01-30 08:18:33 · answer #5 · answered by igottanoe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute
2007-01-30 08:21:00 · answer #6 · answered by destiny 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9.8 out of 10....good job!
2007-01-30 08:16:28 · answer #7 · answered by VeNiE 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sweet.
2007-01-30 08:15:54 · answer #8 · answered by Addicted 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋