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Nothings Black or White...


You said it was all going too fast,
That you didnt want a girlfriend,
That it would never last.
Couldnt understand why you were still lay beside me,
Stroking my skin
And saying that you want me.
Nothing is ever black and white with you,
Can never seem to be what you want me to,
If Im not enough please let me know,
Show me the door and I will go.
Im used to rejection and looking back,
But the futures like a moving map.
Will wait a while but not forever,
For us to be together,
My heart shall never want to let go,
But through empty arms the wind may blow.

2007-01-29 10:31:42 · 8 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

8 answers

Nice.

2007-01-29 10:34:51 · answer #1 · answered by ஐPardon Me while I burnஐ Incubus 1 · 0 0

Nothing is black and white.She is telling you to take it easy but she still is hanging on for you. She likes the way you feel. Tell her that you are you and nothing more. THe future is more than a map its a time-frame. The wind blows all directions and if she wants you ... you know your arms will be open to catch that wind.
Very good I liked it.. Just dont wait forever for that wind to take a different direction. Love wont stand still .. love has a way of taking a different direction. You have to let your heart speak ..

2007-01-29 18:44:23 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

on a scale of 1 to 20 a 3.

2007-01-29 18:37:20 · answer #3 · answered by Ale Cullen♥ 5 · 0 0

Nice

2007-01-29 18:36:46 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Didn't you post this poem earlier? I rated it a 6 or 7 out of 10 I think.

2007-01-29 18:34:54 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Well the form was good and all, but the subject matter wasn't exactly meaningful. You should use more metaphors and adjectives. Check out my poems on my 360 blog! I LOVE poetry...

2007-01-29 18:38:10 · answer #6 · answered by ħ Ì Wêår M¥ Mê?ål Må§k 5 · 0 0

That's pretty good. I like the second half better (the last 10 lines?). I'd give it a 7.8 out of 10.

2007-01-29 18:37:14 · answer #7 · answered by Emily 7 · 0 0

It about brought me to tears

2007-01-29 18:37:25 · answer #8 · answered by quiz buckler scoop 2 · 0 0

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