You're the smile that I carry so often on my face,
I no longer fear being accepted, you're my precious embrace
With you there is no need to be afraid, for everything falls so perfectly in place,
You help me to relax, remind me that life isen't always a race.
You're the warmth within my heart,
I see the world like I never could before, as if everything is beautiful art,
With you there is no need to second guess, you have uncovered everything from the start,
You are my world, no one can compare, you're set apart.
You're my everything, my life, my love,
I see the things love truely consist of,
with you in my life I feel no temptation that I am not above,
You are in my thoughts, and in my dreams it's you I think of.
2007-01-29 08:29:56 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It's nice and lovely but I think you have to catch the important feelings you have in few words. Keep it up.
2007-01-29 08:43:22 · answer #1 · answered by angel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! but, it sounds like a lot of the love songs i hear (example. "you are my world") I personally think you should make it a little shorter.
2007-01-29 08:37:11 · answer #2 · answered by kevin p 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's beautiful!
2007-01-29 08:37:32 · answer #3 · answered by graciegirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋