Scared
He's sitting over there
But I don't know what to say
Should I tell him "Jesus Loves You"
Or can it wait another day
Why am I so scared to tell what I believe
Scared of telling others of what
God has done for me
I shouldn't be afraid
The Lord has set me free
Why am I so scared?
Jesus, please help me
I hear on the news
Another suicide
What possesses people to want to take
Their own lives?
I listen for the name,
And almost faint as I hear,
It was that kid that I was ashamed to
Talk to, I was so near
Why am I so scared to tell what I believe
Scared of telling others of what
God has done for me
I shouldn't be afraid
The Lord has set me free
Why am I so scared?
Jesus, please help me
So many people
Sick and dying
They don't know about
My God, who holds
All the tears they're crying
I can't afford to be scared
I have to tell what I believe
All God's done for me
I am not afraid
The Lord has set me free
I am not scared
Jesus, use me
2007-01-29 07:00:04 · 17 answers · asked by i totally agree with you!! not 3 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
i'm 15 and it's the first thing i've written. what do you think?
2007-01-29 07:00:40 · update #1
Wow! I really think you have a talent. I hope you are keeping a journal of all your writings. Keep it up. Songwriter??...poet??... You speak from your heart and it says alot!
Thanks for sharing!
2007-01-29 07:07:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good. Sounds like it could be used by a Christian band for lyrics or something.
I used to feel scared to talk to people about Jesus, and then I'd feel guilty later because I didn't. But I'm an agnostic now, so I'm pretty much past that. (Not saying that's the best solution for you, just sayin'...)
2007-01-29 07:05:55 · answer #2 · answered by crabskulls 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow I think that's amazing. I'm 15 too and thats better than anything I could ever write!
2007-01-29 09:39:14 · answer #3 · answered by iheartcali92 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, suprised me that it's a first try,,, just keep on writing it's the best way. and always carry pen and paper to jot down first impressions, quick descriptions, atmospheres, stuff like that...
never trust to your memory when you see something u think is great..
good luck!!!!!!considered trying to get anything published?
2007-01-29 08:07:51 · answer #4 · answered by alpha mutt 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty cool!
Your content will generate mixed response, but for
just the poetry itself, awesome job!
2007-01-29 07:04:07 · answer #5 · answered by Elana 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really good if you LOVE Jesus, and are Christain.
2007-01-29 07:17:41 · answer #6 · answered by Becky 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my gosch... it's awesome. Can't believe you wrote that. Just saying, great job, keep it up!
2007-01-29 07:04:37 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Keep writing, your doing well.
2007-01-29 08:34:39 · answer #8 · answered by angel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright. keep working on it you could have some thing here.
2007-01-29 07:16:48 · answer #9 · answered by littleluvkitty 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it good job
2007-01-29 07:02:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋