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Scared

He's sitting over there
But I don't know what to say
Should I tell him "Jesus Loves You"
Or can it wait another day

Why am I so scared to tell what I believe
Scared of telling others of what
God has done for me
I shouldn't be afraid
The Lord has set me free
Why am I so scared?
Jesus, please help me

I hear on the news
Another suicide
What possesses people to want to take
Their own lives?
I listen for the name,
And almost faint as I hear,
It was that kid that I was ashamed to
Talk to, I was so near

Why am I so scared to tell what I believe
Scared of telling others of what
God has done for me
I shouldn't be afraid
The Lord has set me free
Why am I so scared?
Jesus, please help me

So many people
Sick and dying
They don't know about
My God, who holds
All the tears they're crying

I can't afford to be scared
I have to tell what I believe
All God's done for me
I am not afraid
The Lord has set me free
I am not scared
Jesus, use me

2007-01-29 06:11:31 · 11 answers · asked by i totally agree with you!! not 3 in Pregnancy & Parenting Adolescent

I'm 15 and it's the first thing i've ever written, what do you think?

2007-01-29 06:12:08 · update #1

11 answers

wow you are very very very very talented.
I give you a million thumbs up! =]
you know that you can go on
poetry websites and win money!?
its ausome!!! you should give it a try,
just google :online poetry contests

2007-01-29 06:19:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

look at it this way... you're no longer the only guy in the international she nicely-knownshows beautiful. It just so happens that she sounds such as you're tender adequate with your self while she would be able to tell you something like that and not be stricken by skill of it. while it includes stuff like that, do no longer enable it hassle you for the reason which you're only dropping it sluggish. Now if she starts asserting, "i might **** his brains out" then you definately ought to start hectic. yet until eventually then, its only an harmless remark that she made to you via fact she feels which you're tender adequate to deal with it.

2016-09-28 03:52:05 · answer #2 · answered by arieux 4 · 0 0

young lady sence this is your first poem and yoou are so young you just keep on writting and let your mother check it for you maybe you could read them in church some where. god gives us all a gift of some kind and yours maybe writting poems or song lyrics so when you get some words and they seem as tho they mean nothing go ahead and write them down . when I started writting some of my creative writting came so fast I finished them in seconds. then at other times some came slow. always keep a pin and paper with you for the words come at very odd times but share them with your loved ones and best to you in your writting god bless.

2007-01-31 13:02:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I think that that's actually really good for a first song/ poem.

2007-01-29 06:37:51 · answer #4 · answered by meghanhappy 5 · 0 0

i think that was a really good poem for ur very first time

2007-01-29 07:01:04 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

HEY THATS REALLY GOOD IVE BEEN WRITING FOR A LONG TIME AND IF IT HELPS YOU AND MAKE U FEEL GOOD KEEP GOING!

2007-02-02 04:54:34 · answer #6 · answered by neeneehoot 1 · 0 0

that's a really good poem!

2007-01-29 08:36:36 · answer #7 · answered by CGaleh 2 · 0 0

talented very

2007-02-01 13:25:25 · answer #8 · answered by ? 1 · 0 0

thats so good! maybe you should enter a contest!

www.poetryamerica.com

2007-01-29 06:26:33 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

your very talented

2007-02-02 04:42:22 · answer #10 · answered by chkn_fur 5 · 0 0

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