During their past lives,they were arch enemies. He killed her husband and since then she has lived in a life of misery. How she hated him! How she wanted to avenge her husband! Before she died,she still bore extreme hatred for him. How their unexplainable affinity entwined them together in their next lives. He became a top-notch illusionist & magician,while her spirit full of hatred and grudges was still existing and haunting him secretly. Finally,alas the moment had come! Her soul gained the ability to change into human form and he was fated to pay the price that he had caused in his previous life! What affinity allowed them to fall in love together? Because of their love,he paid a tragic price,and at the same time she had successfully taken revenge for her late husband! Was her love for him real or just for revenge?
Okay..just some story thought up by me when I was bored..do comment? Be honest..if you dislike it then please say..thx
2007-01-29 00:26:21 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It shows the makings of a true Harliquin Romance. If you can do 211 more pages, you need a publisher. Keep up the good work.
2007-01-29 00:36:19 · answer #1 · answered by Baw 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im sure it would make a great story, if it acctually made sense..... is it possible to hate a person so much, (while wanting revenge for someones death.....) that you fall in love with them? I dont think so.....rethink your idea so that it makes more sense, then come back and post your plot again........I wouldnt buy it unless i was sure that it made sense to start with and had a decent plot......
2007-01-29 00:37:23 · answer #2 · answered by Mintjulip 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
of direction you could upload humour. memories and books ought to evoke thoughts interior the reader. As for identifying on the right second, it is the adaptation between being a author and being a good author.
2016-10-16 06:14:30 · answer #3 · answered by warrenfeltz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
she got revenge by falling in love with him? its a cute story but you need more details.... what tragic price did he pay... did she kill him?
2007-01-29 00:31:31 · answer #4 · answered by girlfrmneidig 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its pretty good, you´ve got alota imagination. Keep up the great work, im sure you´re gonna go far. =)
2007-01-29 01:54:13 · answer #5 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is your nome-de-plume Barbara Cartland?
Can't decide :)
2007-01-29 00:31:07 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No I wouldn't, unless you put porn on the cover.
2007-01-29 00:29:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'll buy that for a dollar!
2007-01-29 00:29:38 · answer #8 · answered by mjnjtfox 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ok, it needs a lot more.
2007-01-29 00:30:34 · answer #9 · answered by barb 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋