Sewn Together...
Our drunken bodies lie forever,
Our hands they are sewn together,
Im half awake and watch you sleep,
I have no need to count the sheep.
Too drunk to see the world around me
But all I need is right beside me.
So its alright to forget about the morning,
And all the things that tomorrow will need sorting.
Cause right now in this drunken light,
I am yours all the night.
2007-01-28 13:16:51 · 11 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
10
2007-01-29 15:10:52 · answer #1 · answered by Time@ Time 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
4
2007-01-28 21:20:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-01-28 21:22:45 · answer #3 · answered by melissamarie728 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-01-28 21:19:50 · answer #4 · answered by kclynn 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-01-28 22:15:42 · answer #5 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9
2007-01-28 21:19:29 · answer #6 · answered by Tek ~aka~Legs! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9.5 and good job with rhyming that is another .5 points to rate you with a perfect 10 congratulations.
2007-01-28 21:22:14 · answer #7 · answered by Andrew H. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
maybe a 6
2007-01-28 21:21:12 · answer #8 · answered by Delusions of Grandeur 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Drunk poetry, not my deal but ok if you like that sort of thing.
2007-01-28 21:21:36 · answer #9 · answered by zeroartmac 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 for literary style
7 for literary value
but altogether, well written and interesting
2007-01-28 21:21:39 · answer #10 · answered by KB 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋