Can you please tell me the mistakes in these sentences that I made?

Question

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The problems mostly encountered currently are as follows

1.When it rains, the water gets into the house (uncomfortable)
2.When there is strong wind, the house is shaken (uncomfortable)
3.In Ujong Empee U Hamlet WATSAN is not yet available
4.A lot people must fetch clean water to distant places

Answer 1

Nothing really wrong with them, but they would possibly come out better this way:

1.When it rains, the water gets into the house (uncomfortable)

1. Water seeps into the house when it rains.

2.When there is strong wind, the house is shaken (uncomfortable)

2. The house shakes when a strong wind blows.

3.In Ujong Empee U Hamlet WATSAN is not yet available

3. ??Hamlet WATSAN is not available as yet in Ujong Empee U.

4.A lot people must fetch clean water to distant places

4. There are many people who have to go quite a distance to fetch clean water.

That any better?

cheers

Answer 2

1. When it rains, water gets into my house.
2. The house shakes when there is a strong wind.
3. ?
4. Many people retrieve clean water from distant places.

Answer 3

1.When it rains, water leaks into the house.
2.The house shakes in a strong wind.
3.
4.Many people have to travel long distances to fetch clean water.

Answer 4

1. correct
2. When there is a strong wind.....
3. correct
4. ...from distant places