How do you write a proper essay conclusion?

Question

I have been writing essays for a long time and somehow my conclusion always seems short and awkward. Any tips?

Answer 1

in concluding the essay -- you simple state what you have told the audience. In brief terms ... the mantra in college is --

A. Tell em what you are going to tell them

B. Tell em

C. Tell em what you told em.

So if you are using 3 supporting clauses introduced up top, you simple seque from the 3rd supporting clause to a recap of the proof of your thesis

Answer 2

Conclusions do not include any new ideas. To write a proper conclusion, state your main points or arguments again. Just summarize what your essay was about. It doesn't need to be short. All you want to do is briefly repeat what you have already said, and possibly a statement to wrap it all up.

Answer 3

Restate your thesis. I usually do this in the first sentence. Then there are usually several main points(on average three) you've made, re-emphasize those. Stylize the whole thing, generalize with the last sentence then bada-bing bada-boom you've got yourself a conclusion. I once had an english teacher tell me that a weak conclusion could break a paper, so it's definitely an important thing.

Answer 4

Ending the Essay: Conclusions

So much is at stake in writing a conclusion. This is, after all, your last chance to persuade your readers to your point of view, to impress yourself upon them as a writer and thinker. And the impression you create in your conclusion will shape the impression that stays with your readers after they've finished the essay.

The end of an essay should therefore convey a sense of completeness and closure as well as a sense of the lingering possibilities of the topic, its larger meaning, its implications: the final paragraph should close the discussion without closing it off.

To establish a sense of closure, you might do one or more of the following:


Conclude by linking the last paragraph to the first, perhaps by reiterating a word or phrase you used at the beginning.

Conclude with a sentence composed mainly of one-syllable words. Simple language can help create an effect of understated drama.

Conclude with a sentence that's compound or parallel in structure; such sentences can establish a sense of balance or order that may feel just right at the end of a complex discussion.
To close the discussion without closing it off, you might do one or more of the following:


Conclude with a quotation from or reference to a primary or secondary source, one that amplifies your main point or puts it in a different perspective. A quotation from, say, the novel or poem you're writing about can add texture and specificity to your discussion; a critic or scholar can help confirm or complicate your final point.
For example, you might conclude an essay on the idea of home in James Joyce's short story collection, Dubliners, with information about Joyce's own complex feelings towards Dublin, his home. Or you might end with a biographer's statement about Joyce's attitude toward Dublin, which could illuminate his characters' responses to the city. Just be cautious, especially about using secondary material: make sure that you get the last word.


Conclude by setting your discussion into a different, perhaps larger, context. For example, you might end an essay on nineteenth-century muckraking journalism by linking it to a current newsmagazine program like 60 Minutes.

Conclude by redefining one of the key terms of your argument.
For example, an essay on Marx's treatment of the conflict between wage labor and capital might begin with Marx's claim that the "capitalist economy is . . . a gigantic enterprise of dehumanization"; the essay might end by suggesting that Marxist analysis is itself dehumanizing because it construes everything in economic_rather than moral or ethical_terms.


Conclude by considering the implications of your argument (or analysis or discussion).
What does your argument imply, or involve, or suggest? For example, an essay on the novel Ambiguous Adventure, by the Senegalese writer Cheikh Hamidou Kane, might open with the idea that the protagonist's development suggests Kane's belief in the need to integrate Western materialism and Sufi spirituality in modern Senegal. The conclusion might make the new but related point that the novel on the whole suggests that such an integration is (or isn't) possible.


Finally, some advice on how not to end an essay:

Don't simply summarize your essay. A brief summary of your argument may be useful, especially if your essay is long_more than ten pages or so. But shorter essays tend not to require a restatement of your main ideas.

Avoid phrases like "in conclusion," "to conclude," "in summary," and "to sum up." These phrases can be useful_even welcome_in oral presentations. But readers can see, by the tell-tale compression of the pages, when an essay is about to end. You'll irritate your audience if you belabor the obvious.

Resist the urge to apologize. If you've immersed yourself in your subject, you now know a good deal more about it than you can possibly include in a five- or ten- or 20-page essay. As a result, by the time you've finished writing, you may be having some doubts about what you've produced. (And if you haven't immersed yourself in your subject, you may be feeling even more doubtful about your essay as you approach the conclusion.) Repress those doubts. Don't undercut your authority by saying things like, "this is just one approach to the subject; there may be other, better approaches. . ."

Answer 5

start out with a specific statement (it should restate your thesis). then sum up what you said in the body of your paper, becoming more and more general. at the end, make a general statement on your observations and how they affect the world/society/etc.