Is this a good way to phrase my credits on my acting resume?

Question

Credits:

Acting: I have done 4 plays for the public and 1 skit for my Social Studies class.

Dancing: I have done 10 years of dancing: Jazz, 10 years; Ballet, 10 years; Tap, 10 years; Hip-hop, 1 year; Point, 1 year.


Singing: It’s not one of my better areas but I did do 2 Years of choir.

Other Talents: I am really flexible like I can touch the floor with out bending my knees. I also did cheerleading for 2 Years.

Is any part of it confusing?
Should I change any of it?

Answer 1

No, that is not the best way of phrasing it; it doesn't sound very mature at all.

Better:
Acting - I have had roles in 4 public plays plus I have had experience in smaller pieces for my classes

Dancing - I have been dancing for 10 years and have experience in jazz, ballet and tap for the whole time and have begun to learn hip-hop and point in the last year.

Singing - I took part in choir for 2 years (don't talk about the negative)

Other talents - I was a cheerleader for 2 years and I am also very flexible.

Answer 2

You would generally de-personalize it, and take out anything that's self-critical:
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Acting: 4 plays for the public and 1 skit for a Social Studies class.

Dancing: Jazz, 10 years; Ballet, 10 years; Tap, 10 years; Hip-hop, 1 year; Point, 1 year.

Singing: 2 years of choir.

Other Talents: Flexible body; cheerleading for 2 years.
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You might also want to name the plays (if they're published works) and the parts you played.

Answer 3

With the plays, list the parts, otherwise people might think you just had a walk on part.

Singing - just say 2 years choir.