Nothings Black or White.....
You said it was all going too fast,
That you didnt want a girlfriend,
That it would never last.
Couldnt understand why you were still lay beside me,
Stroking my skin
And saying that you want me.
Nothing is ever black and white with you,
Can never seem to be what you want me to,
If Im not enough please let me know,
Show me the door and I will go.
Im used to rejection and looking back,
But the futures like a moving map.
Will wait a while but not forever,
For us to be together,
My heart shall never want to let go,
But through empty arms the wind may blow.
2007-01-27 22:52:55 · 9 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It is a very good poem, structurally it needs a little work but not much the meter of the poem is choppy it would work well as a song. onestly though a thumbs up.
2007-01-27 23:04:57 · answer #1 · answered by Natashya K 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That very nice poem. 10 out of 10
2007-01-28 07:01:24 · answer #2 · answered by mrsrhowell 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If this is what you wrote because you are alone in a relationship?
Move out and on
Never get back
Rob.
sorry:addition:very good poem.
2007-01-28 07:00:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem takes 10' out of 10 and deserves a star.
if this poem came out from your life,then don't go back to him.he doesn't deserve you...
2007-01-28 07:07:25 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
great poem. I give it a 10.
2007-01-28 07:13:58 · answer #5 · answered by Barbi W 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice!
2007-01-28 07:13:35 · answer #6 · answered by Sk8erGurl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 out of ten.
It's very good,keep wrtiting!
2007-01-28 07:08:53 · answer #7 · answered by j.h. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, yeah, it sounds good!
2007-01-28 07:13:36 · answer #8 · answered by Goody2shoes 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
100 out of 10..............................
2007-01-28 06:59:20 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋