fear is an illusion
your eyes hold the truth
darkest secrets unveiling
behind the curtains of reality
i wrote this when i was abt 13-14 yrs old.im 19 now ,wat do u guys think?
2007-01-27 17:57:55 · 5 answers · asked by J o h n 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
no,i knew what i was saying alright..
i was wondering about a diffrernt world out there...fantasy
and reality...about mysteries of this universe
and fear is keeping us at bay
and stopping us to find more about these things
ben,have u seen things u couldnt explain besides ghosts?
2007-01-27 21:11:02 · update #1
it's okay...it's the kind hat 13-14 year old's write...i am one myself...i think i have written a masterpiece and what i get is scorns..anyways, it's kind of unconnected..fera and the curtains of reality don't really have any connection..i would say it will sound better if there were rhymes...what i really like is the thememof the poem..fera is something that isn't an easy topic to write on..i would want to know the title of the poem..
2007-01-27 23:15:17 · answer #1 · answered by teenwitch 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You probably didn't really know what you were saying and you just put some words together in an order that looked good and sounded cool, but that's what most 13-year-olds think poetry is anyway.
2007-01-28 02:23:09 · answer #2 · answered by Ben B 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I'd say you had alot of insight for one so young.
2007-01-28 02:12:08 · answer #3 · answered by **brainy licious**J;-D 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's pretty average for a preteen.
2007-01-28 22:59:57 · answer #4 · answered by lavendergirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is good.
2007-01-28 03:40:05 · answer #5 · answered by jeeccentricx2 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋