plz help me one simple question?

Question

I'm writing a resume and I don't know if my resume is correct
definately help me plz.

Self Introduction (Experience, Project, Training & etc)

I have not many experiences except one when I was charged of military service. Fortunately, I was selected as a administration member. So I worked very hard at the administration department, and my main major was accountant.
My toeic score is not good since I have tested Toeic only one time one month ago, so it was my first time, and I have been studying for Toeic test.

Q Please add more educational background as same as the above on the below if you have

In reality, my major is English and English Literature but since I have been interested in Economics, I made Economics my submajor.

Answer 1

You need to streamline this resume. The earmark of a good resume is that you are succinct. Say what you need to say in as few words as possible. Start with what you are looking for, either in a job or education or whatever field you are writing your resume for. When you include your experience, list places and times that are relevent to your resume, e.g., jobs held, volunteer work done, classes taken. Briefly list what your job (class) entailed, e.g., answered phone, took notes at meetings., etc. List schools and majors. Also list any honors, etc that you received. Last, you can add in anything that you think is applicable to the job (class, etc), like what computer experience you have, etc.

Make sure your resume is grammatically correct and spelling is right. Don't add things like your age, marital status, children, etc. They have little or nothing to do with your resume and employers can't ask you those things (at least not in America).

Lastly, let someone else read your resume. Get feedback.

Good luck.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

What you could include in your resume is that you are a self starter, self motivated and a quick learner..