I am...
Not a writer
Not artistic
Not easily labelled
Not a feminist
Not political
Nothing you want
But everything you see
I am...
Secretive
Open to anything
Hidden
Depressive
Happy
Full of smiles
But not full of life
I am....
nothing
but everything to you
Intelligent
Creative
Not organized
A sad little girl
Refusing to grow up
I am...
Beautiful
If only to you
unique
In an unoriginal way
Funny
free
Uninhibited
But held down
by society
{Expectations}
I am...
shy
unnoticed
But remembered
I am....
nothing you expect
Unsure of myself
Something you hate
...to love
Or love...
....to hate
turning your world
upside down
and loving it
I am...
unpredictable
Free spirited
to a point
Emotional
Weak
Apparently strong
And prone to tears
I am...
a tornado
Quick to anger
Quicker to defend
loveing
caring
hating
and a sweetie
I am....
a friend
a sister
a daughter
a grandaughter
a cousin
a neice
a writer
a poet
an artist
a female
......Me
2007-01-27 17:14:31 · 15 answers · asked by veronica 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think it's awesome !
2007-01-27 17:20:56 · answer #1 · answered by luvnlife 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes its a nice poem, but wish you'd kept the words a bit closer together I had to keep scrolling down the screen. If it were in a book it would take up a lot of space. U can still have the same impact without the spacing.
2007-01-28 02:12:14 · answer #2 · answered by crazy_fridayman 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Strictly speaking, is it a poem, "a literary composition in verse, especially one expressing deep feeling or noble thought in an imaginative way"?
Yes.
And I like it.
But does it describe you or enapsulate you? Can any poem or description describe anyone? Or are such things -- and your poem -- merely capturing an essence of you at a particular point in time, like a snapshot or in mathematics, when you identify a part of a line it's supposed to be (I think) representative of that entire line.
Hmmm, we're not lines. We're not two dimensional, but we all have borders, don't we?
Oh, small points department, it's "niece"
Very good job.
2007-01-27 17:28:11 · answer #3 · answered by cboni2000 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it very eloquently expresses the duality that is everyone we are all more than is apparent on the surface or upon first meeting. but a little too long for a Tshirt
2007-01-27 17:30:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, to be honest it sounds like it's the kind of thing you keep in a private notebook for yourself.
It's sort of typical quasi-angsty standard teenager.
2007-01-27 17:20:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is ok, very descriptive lol ummm I'm not a writer but on my opinion i would give 3/5
2007-01-27 17:23:40 · answer #6 · answered by Lost 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, it has that unique style that I like but can hardly ever find. Two thumbs up from me, keep it up, I'd love to see more.
2007-01-27 17:20:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very perceptive self realization. It seems to be directed to one person. I am impressed
2007-01-31 12:59:24 · answer #8 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. I think it has a great style and nice wording.
2007-01-28 06:04:21 · answer #9 · answered by isayssoccer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It reads like an "About You" from myspace.
2007-01-28 15:01:24 · answer #10 · answered by lavendergirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Intresting; i like it, great writter
2007-01-27 17:23:10 · answer #11 · answered by ♥!BabyDoLL!♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋