Hi.......can somebody plz check gramatical errors of my writing........it's urgent?

Question

According to the recent survey by the department of commerce,Americans are not saving their after tax Income.Since national saving rate depends on the cash and not any other assets,it could be inaccurate, as many americans are nowadays believe in planning their retiremnet by investing or owing properties in booming real estate market rather than saving money in bank.Though americans are becoming vigilant about the prevailing conditions, national saving rate figures cannot be disregarded.Because of the continous decrease in the savings rate and a trends of spending before earning by younger generation can lead to the crisis in future.So, according to her,American should save for their retirment instead on depending on the future value of thier property(homes),as government is not going to help

I am trying to summarize one of the article

Is the sentence structure correct

Answer 1

1. Change it to "According to a recent survey"....they've had more than one, so you can't say "the".
2. Capitalize "Department of Commerce".
3. The word "income" should NOT be capitalized.
4. Put a space after the commas throughout.
5. Put 2 spaces after the periods throughout.
6. Add "the" before National Savings Rate in the second sentence and remove it before "cash" in the same sentence. And don't forget to capitalize National Savings Rate throughout.
7. Change it to "as many Americans now believe" (and capitalize Americans throughout).
8. The word is "retirement".
9. The word is "owning" not "owing".
10. Add "the" before "booming real estate market", and "the" before bank in the second sentence.
11. Again, place a "the" before "National Savings Rate figures" in the third sentence.
12. The word is "continuous" not "continous".
13. Fourth sentence: "The decrease in the National Savings Rate," (keep it consistent throughout and don't forget the comma, and leave out "Because of" at the beginning so it works out nicer).
14. The word is "trend" not "trends" in the fourth sentence.
15. Change to "younger generations, " in the fourth sentence (and don't forget the comma).
16. Use "can lead to a crisis in the future." Unless you're speaking of a SPECIFIC crisis, you'll want to use "a crisis" and "the future".
17. In the last sentence, who is "her"? Instead of saying "her" use the name of the person you're referring to. (and don't forget to cite the source at the end of the essay/report)
18. Use "Americans" when you're talking about more than one.
19. Again, "retirement" not "retirment".
20. Should be "instead of depending", not "instead on depending".
21. The word is "their" not "thier".
22. Put a space between "property" and "(homes)" so it reads: "property (homes),"
23. Change it to "as the American Government" (again, be specific).
24. Add a period to the end of the last sentence.

Answer 2

According to the recent survey by the Department of Commerce, Americans are not saving their after-tax income. Since national savings rates depend on cash, and not any other assets, it could be inaccurate, as many Americans nowadays believe in planning their retiremnet by investing or owing properties in the booming real estate market rather than saving money in a bank. Though Americans are becoming vigilant about the prevailing conditions, national saving rate figures cannot be disregarded. The continuous decrease in the savings rate and a trend of spending before earning by the younger generation can lead to a crisis in future. So, according to her, Americans should save for their retirement instead of depending on the future value of their property (homes) as government is not going to help.

Answer 3

Oh boy, o.k. then.

According to the recent survey by the Department of Commerce, Americans are not saving their net income. Since national savings rates depend on the cash, and not any other assets, it could be inaccurate. Many Americans nowadays believe in planning their retirement by investing or owning properties in the booming real estate market, rather than saving their money in the bank. Though Americans are becoming aware of the prevailing conditions, national savings rate figures cannot be disregarded. Because of the continuous decrease in the savings rate and a trend of spending before earning, by the younger generation, it appears that a future crisis is looming. So, according to **********(you need to write the woman's name, not HER!!), Americans should save for their retirement instead of depending on the future value of their property (home) as the Government is not going to help.


PEACE & LOVE & ALL THAT

Answer 4

- Two "m" in grammatical
- Put a space or two after all periods
- Put a space after all commas
- Department of Commerce is a name (thus capital C and D)
- Income is lower case
- "are nowadays believe in" ...delete are
- americans -> Americans
- and a trends -> and a trend
- retirment -> retirement
- thier -> their

You would have found most (if not all of these) by putting the text into MS Word

Answer 5

Agree with Ivan also continous should be continuous

The line So, according to her, American should save ........

it reads better by putting
So, according to her, Americans should save

Answer 6

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Answer 7

put a space after commas.
"Tax Income" make both uppercase, or lower case.
Americans- capitalize!
put a space after periods.
put a space between the words n parentheses. like (this)
Their not thier.
thats all i can see.
n sry, i can only correct da grammar since i have NO idea wat ur talkin about...=).

Answer 8

do what the old man said