What do you think of this poem? (talent, content, interpretation)?

Question

Thinking of the rush of day fading to black;
Me stiff and at last assertive;
My death the final maim to a life cast in shadow;
Raindrops falling on my grave satiate the sorrow that screams to be heard;
And I am painted blushed and lipsticked to portray a presentable conclusion to a never have begun beginning;
And all of the Klonopin wafers and Ativan tic-tacs in the end could not behead the demon that threw tantrums inside me;
All the love started and ended, lost but never forgotten is now the dirt that weighs heavily all about me;
At last I'm alone forever, the only good friend who always came to see me;
....And yet my flesh is still intact and I am sitting in death's waiting room.
The End

Critique it for morbidity, style, language
But it was written in less than four minutes, also

Come on, someone answer

Answer 1

I think you need to seek medical help immediately for your suicidal thoughts. Go to an emergency room!