You are the most profound of creatures, what I thought was beauty before is now put to shame in your presence...how can I keep you asleep, making the world at peace for just a little while, so I can watch you slowly grow prettier with every unconscious breath? How can I keep you here with me, your eyes always on me, your heart always with me, your arms always around me?
Whadya think?♥
2007-01-27 05:45:34 · 34 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yeah I wrote it this morning in between writing up questions...
2007-01-27 05:50:35 · update #1
I knew someone would say they regretted, but oh well you made me laugh! : )
2007-01-27 05:51:31 · update #2
Maybe it was a little dark, I've never heard of Jeffrey Dahmer...
2007-01-27 05:53:16 · update #3
absolutely amazing, you put to words what I think as I watch my daughter sleep- love it
2007-01-27 05:53:56 · answer #1 · answered by semihemi08 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sounds a little like a Jeffrey Dahmer quote....kind of psycho.
2007-01-27 05:51:43 · answer #2 · answered by MsAdventure 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
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2016-09-28 01:43:07 · answer #3 · answered by intriago 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Almost perfect. I am not one for a totally possessive love all the time but the attention can be nice sometimes!
2007-01-27 05:50:29 · answer #4 · answered by JustLynn 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think this is beautifully written and whoever wrote it, definitely has talent! I'm a professional writer and I think these are a good choice of words! Thanks for sharing this with me. I enjoyed reading it and it will definitely worth the read!
2007-01-27 05:54:12 · answer #5 · answered by journeythroughlife85 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its lovely. You are quite good at poetry. I think you are also either
in love or considering being in love. Keep writing, you are very
young and already very prolific.
2007-01-27 06:00:26 · answer #6 · answered by nemesis 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Reminds me of a mother watching her child sleep
2007-01-27 05:51:58 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like holding someone in a catatonic or comatose state against their own natural will.
2007-01-27 06:00:05 · answer #8 · answered by Compass Rose 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
What you see reflects what you are. Whatever beauty I have is but a shadow to the candle that lights from yours.
2007-01-27 05:50:32 · answer #9 · answered by AxisofOddity 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow! Wish someone would look deep into my eyes and say those words to me.
2007-01-27 05:49:58 · answer #10 · answered by Gargirl™® 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋