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I was bored so i was just wrighting a poem thing but i dont really know how to finish it or where its going, so let me know what you think...THANKS...ps. its untitled!
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She cried out in the dark hoping you could hear, hoping you’d be near. She pretends to be cold so that you might hold, you left her there. When did you go why didn’t she know, because when it’s all too late, its all too late and there’s nothing she could say, hoping she could change your mind that is why and you don’t care that’s why she cares. Take her hand tell her you understand tell her it’s gonna be ok and that your gonna stay. That is what she wants to hear, she doesn’t want you to disappear so don’t disappear that’s her biggest fear and you don’t know. You don’t know she hurts, you don’t know she’s in pain…all she wants is to be accepted. You came by but without saying hi she was neglected… tell her what she needs so she doesn’t leave--

2007-01-27 04:56:17 · 6 answers · asked by kykygoo 3 in Family & Relationships Other - Family & Relationships

6 answers

before the tables are reversed
and its now you that is cursed
wishing a different fate
but now its too late

2007-01-27 05:29:53 · answer #1 · answered by Mike 6 · 0 0

She is looking for a word a look from him to know if she is seen.
when he is is near her heart flutters, when he is afar her heart yearns for only him.

Titled: Searching for his love.

2007-01-27 13:08:14 · answer #2 · answered by Oilfieldtrashwtx 3 · 0 0

That sounds really good .. I'm sure you can come up with more .. just give yourself time to dwell on it!* G//L.

2007-01-27 13:02:18 · answer #3 · answered by Brittany 4 · 0 0

u could put soo she dosent leave u b if u want ima not much of a poet but dats wat i come up wit hope dat helps good luk! btw: i tink ur poem is rlly good u should get it published!

2007-01-27 13:08:00 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Just tell her I LOVE YOU! and the rest is history!

2007-01-27 13:11:52 · answer #5 · answered by BlickAfixz 2 · 0 0

Not much of a poet.
I apologize.
But it's good so far.
But I can't help.
Sorry.

2007-01-27 13:02:10 · answer #6 · answered by Xxawakened_zombiexX 1 · 0 0

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