Little darling don’t you cry
I see that teardrop in your eye
Mommy had to go away
Maybe she’ll come back, again someday
Things happen at our age
Sometimes its just a stage
That we sometimes will regret
But we never will forget
You know we had a fight
In front of you, it wasn’t right
So come closer little dear
I’ll wipe away that flowing tear
Daddy’s staying home today
I just can not, go away
As she looked up from her place
I saw a smile upon her face
Lets make a plan to spend our day
So hurry up, be on our way
To the park we will go
To watch the gentle waters flow
We’ll climb a mountain way up high
Closer to the golden sky
At the top, we’ll make a pack
That once a week, we will come back
Its you and me together now
We’ll make it thru. I know some how
Till mommy knows she shouldn’t flee
Be with us two, and always be
2007-01-26 23:57:30 · 9 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
cute...i would give it a 9!!
2007-01-27 00:02:07 · answer #1 · answered by Sled Queen 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is a most suitable poem. i love it. It holds heartrending actuality in it. I provide it a one hundred out of ten. i'm going over the size in this one. i'm sorry i could not save it interior it regardless of the actuality that. no longer many people can write poems like this. good job, i wish to ascertain more desirable once you've any.
2016-10-16 04:20:29 · answer #2 · answered by asar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, it is nice...
And certainly fine for the child to receive it...
Now to give a rate, I can not...
Except....
Shouldn't you sing it?
If so, to a little girl,
It could be between 7 and 8...
Don't forget, for grow-ups,
It is nearly never perfect!
2007-01-27 00:07:43 · answer #3 · answered by klaartedubois 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Greatest thing that happened to me this week is to read what you wrote, 10/10 seriously
keep it up
2007-01-27 07:50:52 · answer #4 · answered by Kwassa Kwassa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sad - as it rings too close to the truth for sooo many families these days. Prayers for happy days... and strength to those that are filled with such sorrow. Well Wishes.
10
2007-01-27 00:10:12 · answer #5 · answered by Joy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10/10. Of course you'll make it thru. Good luck.
2007-01-27 00:05:44 · answer #6 · answered by Silver 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats beautiful. definately a 10.
2007-01-30 14:40:33 · answer #7 · answered by xtal6872 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10! great job!
2007-01-27 00:29:34 · answer #8 · answered by Shelley 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7... Not bad
2007-01-27 00:38:50 · answer #9 · answered by lilly l 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋