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I come form Hong kong, my English is too bad. Thus I want to know how to write a composition about ocean(Just Ocean not animals). Please use in simple English, Thanks a lot.

2007-01-26 13:35:35 · 6 answers · asked by oO_Neo_Oo 1 in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Hey! You're lucky because English and math is my best subject in school...that and photography. Writing a compostion about the Ocean is so simple. You can use it to describe so many words. Just write what u feel about the ocean and you'll get into it. Describe it a bit, tell about the animals that live in it. Here, I'll start it off for u:

[your name]
english class
1st period


The Ocean
Like they say, a picture can describe thousands of words
In my describtion, a Ocean is a ig blue underground land where creatures of all kind and sea animals live and roam freely. A Ocean is deep like a humans mind [for example]. There are 100,000,000 of species that live in there and they wander around, think of it as the U.S. [ another example]. The U.S. is a home for people and the Ocean is a place for sea creautes, all livign things must be treated fairly unless for a inspentive reason.

Just go on like that and you'll be fine....that little paragraph I wrote was an example of how u should wrtie ur paper. Good luck =]

2007-01-26 14:48:47 · answer #1 · answered by Vin R 1 · 0 0

A good resource for any essay is an encyclopedia. Since you may not have one at home, Wikipedia will provide you with a lot of information. This link, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ocean , seems to have all the information you would need to know about the ocean and oceanic life (i.e. animals, plants.) Also, Wikipedia can help you with writing compositions, such as correct formatting. You can also change the language of the articles found in Wikipedia so that you can better understand them, if you would like. Just remember, professors and teachers use Wikipedia as a source, too, so try not to plagiarize (copy information from the sources without noting where you got it.)

2007-01-26 21:55:09 · answer #2 · answered by Kari Grace 4 · 0 0

Talk about the ocean being deep, blue, large, powerful, full of life and beautiful.

Your English will get better with practice!

Good Luck!

2007-01-26 21:44:32 · answer #3 · answered by Lisa the Pooh 7 · 0 0

You can write about how the sound of the ocean affects others feelings.

2007-01-26 21:47:40 · answer #4 · answered by Dana S 1 · 0 0

Try to talk about how the ocean smells, feels, and tastes like. Try explaining what the ocean looks like and what sounds it makes.

2007-01-26 21:47:07 · answer #5 · answered by Nikki 2 · 0 0

Simple, just write about salt water, waves, tides, tidecharts, seas, inlets, sounds, bays, fjords, tsunamis, that kind of thing. You probably know more than you think you do.

2007-01-26 21:45:45 · answer #6 · answered by eschampion 3 · 0 0

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