Can anyone give me few lines of a good hook or introduction to start my narrative essay of my most memorable trip, the setting first takes place when the plane landed
2007-01-26 09:55:34 · 10 answers · asked by tennisgurl 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
As the plane touched down I felt the wheels skip along the concrete, and I knew somehow that this trip was going to have the same effect on me, just like leaving tracks on a runway this trip would alter my soul and change my point of view on the way I saw the world...
i dunno something like that haha its a little dramatic but its good to start with a metaphor or something
2007-01-26 10:02:32 · answer #1 · answered by whitelampshade 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
of all the landings on all the planes in the world she had to be on mine .
the day was hot the kind of hot that soaked your clothes and actually gave you a chill .
As the great silver bird made its return to tera firma I could sense this was no ordinary trip.
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2007-01-26 10:49:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
When the door on plane snapped open and the stewardess said b'bye, at that moment it hit me; nothing would ever be the same for me again. Cancun was like nothing I 'd ever seen.
2007-01-26 09:59:22 · answer #3 · answered by Joe Schmo from Kokomo 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
could a coffin be mandatory be it loose will? or could the full factor approximately each little thing to lose became already lost, aside from their souls? sorry, being truly dramatic right here.
2016-11-27 20:41:27 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i could help you if you could tell me for sure if the landing was a safe and uneventful one, a loud one, or very boring, etc., that allowed you to sleep through it. there are several ways to open the story, but without that essential fact, submitting an opening suggestion for you would be impossible. thanks!
2007-01-26 10:00:33 · answer #5 · answered by vrandolph62 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Use alot of detail to make it exciting. Plus teachers like that kind of thing.
2007-01-26 10:03:34 · answer #6 · answered by NeonBlue 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
From ground to flight we arrived that night.
2007-01-26 10:06:02 · answer #7 · answered by spidercents123 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I finally arived at __________! The airplane started to go down. Its wheels go out and were ready to touch the ground. (your feelings)...........
2007-01-26 10:10:21 · answer #8 · answered by ♥Roberta. 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
"The bark of the tires on the asphalt set my heart racing..."
Best of luck!
2007-01-26 09:58:57 · answer #9 · answered by disposable_hero_too 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
why worry
just do it I think
if we can let good things in , we get good things
if we only expect and let in crap, its all we get
2007-01-26 10:00:10 · answer #10 · answered by kurticus1024 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋