All I want is love
Is that too much to ask
Look at me again
I always wear a mask
The happy face you see
Every time you look
I wonder what you think
Can you see inside the book?
The covers are hard and rough
While the softness is inside
Hidden from the world
Invisible to the naked eye
The special person that I dream for
Will never come my way
So I slowly walk the shore
While the waves on break away
I replay inside my head
The moments of our life
Too bad everything is dead
You killed it with that knife
So I walk alone again
Like I’ve been doing all this time
But now I’m looking for a friend
That wouldn't sell me for a dime
Leave my head, I want you out
Leave the bed, and don't dare to shout
I hate you love, leave me alone
Out of my heart, you are forever gone
2007-01-26 09:24:57 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i hoped you liked it. The poem is not about me, i just felt sad one day and wrote it. hope u enjoyed it.
2007-01-26 09:25:42 · update #1
Not really, the abab rhyme scheme is kind of juvenile.
2007-01-26 09:29:37 · answer #1 · answered by Whiskey Tango Foxtrot 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
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2016-11-27 20:36:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! You should write poem's for a living. Don't show it to us! Some one might steal your work!!!
Still, very good poem. :-D
2007-01-26 09:31:36 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes I see what you feel through your writing
2007-01-26 09:37:59 · answer #4 · answered by Wandering Sage 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not too bad ♥ i had a difficult time following the context though..not because i don't understand it but because it doesn't flow well..keep writing!!
2007-01-26 09:34:27 · answer #5 · answered by Tek ~aka~Legs! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats an awesome poem!!
just 1 thing..."while the waves on break away" doesnt really make much sense...but still thats really really good
2007-01-26 09:29:48 · answer #6 · answered by x plug in baby xo 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
seems juvenile..... i wrote better poems than that when i was 11
2007-01-26 09:37:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
that is really good i liked it.
2007-01-26 09:36:24 · answer #8 · answered by Ally 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh my beautfull
2007-01-26 09:35:18 · answer #9 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hOPE YOU FEEL BETTER.
LIKED IT
rOB.
2007-01-26 09:29:57 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋