Why are you being this way toward me?
There’s one thing going around and around in my
head and I can’t quite seem to figure it out.
Based upon what you’ve been telling me all this time, I
understand that you are a really neat person……
like you are always trying to help other people, you’ve
said that it is absolutely necessary that we ask
questions on yahoo and answer them.
So here is my question: What is most important……………. to get up from my desk and walk down toward to the front of the
office and announce to everyone else that I am
totally nuts…… or, on the other hand, to spend the rest of
my life doing the best I can in order to be crazy……….
you know, to live, to think and act like a nutcase?
What do you think?
2007-01-26 08:19:01 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
every poem has its own demand to the theme and story being told. As long as you like it and you feel good about it you are fine. Keep Up the Good Work!!!!
2007-01-26 09:28:01 · answer #1 · answered by indrani b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! Good job! I couldn't do better! And it doesn't have to rhyme or be in a skinny littl column to be "poemish" people!
2007-01-26 16:28:28 · answer #2 · answered by J Candid 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats the beauty of poetry-IT DOES NOT NEED TO RHYME NOR BE POEMISH (if thats even in the English dictionary)
2007-01-26 16:48:52 · answer #3 · answered by sweetgirl_a5 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice but not very poemish
2007-01-26 16:28:23 · answer #4 · answered by Water_Princess 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think it sounds like a poem. Try using paragraph form, or change your style...
2007-01-26 16:58:13 · answer #5 · answered by Angela M 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice.. just very wordy
2007-01-26 16:27:40 · answer #6 · answered by Slurpee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um... no comment *laughs*
2007-01-26 16:55:06 · answer #7 · answered by Miley Cyrus 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think yur crazy!!! tee hee hee!!!
2007-01-26 16:27:32 · answer #8 · answered by *abbylicious* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WTF???? P.S. Your avatar scares the crap outta me!
2007-01-26 16:50:28 · answer #9 · answered by Mr. Knowitall 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋