The darkness creeps closer and closer.
Shielding the lambs from the light.
It whispers to them the lullaby
Hush little lambs, do not fear.
I am here young lamb to protect you, you see.
The light shows things you should not see.
It reveals the souls filled with pain.
Pain that should be hidden away.
Pain that wishes to scar your poor young mind.
To steal the innocence that is held so dear.
So listen little lambs and you will learn…
Run from the light and go to the safety of the night.
2007-01-26 05:39:41 · 9 answers · asked by willow 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It is very dark. However, I like your use of symbolism. Now try to write the exact opposite poem. Same pattern but uplifting...
2007-01-26 05:48:12 · answer #1 · answered by Ralph 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just too negative for me. Paints an unhealthy picture of the present.
2007-01-26 14:04:09 · answer #2 · answered by mackjcsf 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful...(copywrite)...come towards the light though, Carolane
2007-01-26 13:50:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
dark and deep
2007-01-26 14:38:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
R U getting F---ked? It seems so....Enjoy it yar !
2007-01-26 13:46:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretty good.
2007-01-26 13:46:43 · answer #6 · answered by ♪ ♫Jin_Jur♫ ♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-01-26 13:44:09 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
its ok but i am no real judge of poetry
2007-01-26 13:46:41 · answer #8 · answered by bran72072 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its goo i didnt really read all of it!
2007-01-26 13:45:13 · answer #9 · answered by HAPPY! 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋