How could I make this sentence more analytical?

Question

Through his portrayal of characters and setting in A Yellow Raft in Blue Water, Michael Dorris reveals many of the tragedies and events that he has experienced growing up as a mixed blood Native American.

Answer 1

You need to add information. You want to build the analysis you are trying to convey to the reader.

Try this:

The portrayal of characters in A Yellow Raft in Blue Water reveals many of the tragedies and events experienced by Michael Dorris. Growing up as a mixed blood Native American, (insert descriptions of tragedies and events) ... The book's setting is another way of demonstrating Dorris' tragedies. The novel takes place in (describe setting and how it makes the tragedies/events demonstrative). Add more information to catch your reader's attention and hold it.

Good start.

Hope this helps.

Answer 2

In order to understand the many of the tragedies and events that Michael Dorris experienced growing up as a mixed blood Native American in A Yellow Raft in Blue Water we need to analyze each character he portrayed as well as his surroundings

Answer 3

Many of mixed blood Native American Michael Dorris' personal events and tragedies are revealed in A Yellow Raft in Blue Water.

Answer 4

In A Yellow Raft in Blue Water, Michael Dorris portrays his hardships in life as a mixed blood Native American.

(You can go on later and indicate how he portrays said hardships.)

Answer 5

for more than one minute i'm thinking of answer but i think that this should be a play not a sentence!!