just some silly thoughts in my head that i wrote..
i stop, i look, i listen
i stop, i look and listen
i stop, why did i look?
why did i stop?
why did i listen?
i stop look and keep listening
i sit, get up, sleep
i get up to go down
im down then up
i sit then sleep
i sleep but can't
i can't sleep
i laugh, i giggle, i chuckle
i smile, i laugh, i smile
i laugh, i smile, i'm happy
i'm happy then unhappy
unhappy then happy, its sad
i cry
i get in, i get out, around
i get in, i get in, can't get out
why did i get in?
why i can't get out?
can't stay in, around
i'm leaving
i have, i need
but don't want
to leave
i'll be off, i'll fly
so i'll say
my goodbye
2007-01-26 01:17:54 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
everyone, thanks for giving a bit of ur time reading this..
i'll be posting another writing of mine in a few......
2007-01-26 01:50:27 · update #1
that is very very very very beautiful...you got talent sweety...I like that alot i feel and get what your saying....I LIKE IT ALOT!!!!
2007-01-26 01:24:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very original and creative. Good job!
2007-01-26 01:26:34 · answer #2 · answered by HopeGrace 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very interesting.
2007-01-26 01:23:22 · answer #3 · answered by luvmuzik 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow thats random. well personally its confusing but its good at d same time!! x
2007-01-26 01:23:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-01-26 01:32:35 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2007-01-26 01:23:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's okay i mean its good. good job but it's confusing. try to write like more songs like chris bROwn or somthing...=[]
2007-01-26 01:24:28 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Wonderful! ;]
2007-01-26 01:25:48 · answer #8 · answered by ImperfectPiinkiish♥ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very 'Arty' I like it
2007-01-26 01:25:40 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Coolie its very contradicting! i like it.
2007-01-26 01:23:53 · answer #10 · answered by Rae 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋