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Here's a section of one of them:
The knife shines bright
On this moonless night,
Grasping for a way out.
See the blood on my wrists?
This is the way I slit.
2007-01-25 12:46:27 · 13 answers · asked by Laura 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
yea,your writing is awsome..and ignore what other people say whether its happy or sad its your emotions and its your,escape, so to speak ,very awsome...poetry
2007-01-25 13:24:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
that SUCKS.
let me guess... youre 14?
the only attention youre gonna get is negative.
that is NOT artistic or expressive at all.
try writting poems for the sake of your feelings
not attention
here, i feel sorry for you. Sorry That youre so pitiful
2007-01-26 02:46:02 · answer #2 · answered by Meeowf 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
If ur talking about urself no thats not cool, but if u jus write to write i guess i would be ok if ur into that kind of thing.....but i dnt like it personally
2007-01-25 12:53:51 · answer #3 · answered by kmonk_08 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I love poems but not that one exactly, why don't you put something more positive into it it will sound more outstanding and more beautiful
2007-01-25 12:53:56 · answer #4 · answered by j13 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
juuuuuuust nice but it feels a bit scary
2007-01-25 13:38:33 · answer #5 · answered by fuing 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Yes I Do
I can't think of but I'll get back to you
2007-01-25 12:54:23 · answer #6 · answered by Talisha S 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
.itz a good way to get out ur anger or wutever ur feelin-poemz.
lol. ♥♥^
♥good luck
2007-01-25 12:53:09 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
wow, if you are talking about yourself... get help,
if this is just a poem nothing more... then great, i like it... keep writing...
2007-01-26 01:51:53 · answer #8 · answered by girl_of_your_dreams_1331 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
(Backs away slowy and looks at every one else) Creepy but Awsome!!!!!!!!!
2007-01-25 13:50:40 · answer #9 · answered by Streak 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
no, that sucks. too cliche and melodramatic. you should talk about living before you talk about dying.
2007-01-25 12:51:51 · answer #10 · answered by Each1Teach1 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋